Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific reasons using simple, correct English. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant phrases.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I also like learning new songs from my favourite singers, which makes it fun to spend my free time singing.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Focus on giving a clear response about whether you have taken singing lessons or not. Use simple sentences and correct grammar to improve clarity.

例: No, I have not taken any professional singing lessons yet, but I practice singing by myself every morning to improve my skills.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to answer the question directly with a topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Be specific about who you want to sing for and why.

例: I want to sing for my family and friends because they support me. Also, I enjoy sharing my singing with them when we spend time together at home or online.

提案: Your answer is missing. Always provide at least a short response to the question, including your opinion and a reason or example to support it. This will make your answer more complete and natural.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel joyful and relaxed. For example, singing with friends can create a fun and positive atmosphere.

× I do like singing because I can see my hot dog to the new songs and I owe some about some singers so I like to spend my time saying.

✓ I do like singing because I can listen to new songs and I know some about some singers, so I like to spend my time singing.

The original sentence misuses 'hot dog' instead of 'listen' and 'saying' instead of 'singing'. The verb 'listen' should be used with the preposition 'to' and 'singing' is the correct gerund form to express the activity. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I have note on every morning at the same efficiently and just over bottom supposed to spend my time thinking but I learned from a professional yet.

✓ I have not practiced every morning at the same time efficiently and just supposed to spend my time thinking, but I have not learned from a professional yet.

The sentence contains incorrect verb forms and unclear phrases. 'Have note' should be 'have not practiced' to express a negative present perfect action. 'Learned' should be in present perfect 'have not learned' to indicate an action not completed up to now. Also, 'at the same efficiently' is corrected to 'at the same time efficiently' for clarity.

× Since I sent most of the time at my home on line for my friends as well.

✓ Since I spend most of the time at my home online with my friends as well.

The verb 'sent' is incorrect; it should be 'spend' to indicate time usage. 'On line' should be 'online' as one word. The preposition 'with' is appropriate to indicate being together with friends online.