Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构混乱，影响了表达的自然和有效性。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复和不完整的句子，同时保持回答简洁明了。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because it helps me express my emotions and relax. For example, when I feel sad, I like to sing out loud to let my feelings flow. Singing always makes me feel better.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，如“taught”应为“taught myself singing”，句子结构不完整。建议加强语法练习，使用连贯的句子表达自己的观点，避免重复和不准确的词汇。

例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I taught myself by watching online courses. I find it very helpful and enjoyable to learn singing this way.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在重复和语法错误，如“friend, friends”和“we, we, we”。建议注意句子流畅性，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I would like to sing for my friends because they bring me a lot of joy. Singing together helps us feel closer and creates a special bond, which I really enjoy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“singing are”应为“singing allows”，句子结构不完整。建议加强语法和词汇的准确使用，表达时注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

例: Yes, I strongly believe that singing brings happiness because it allows us to express ourselves and connect with others. For example, at music festivals, people come together and share joy through singing.

× Yeah, I enjoy seeing very much because it could easily express my emotions an I could it could help me relax.

✓ Yeah, I enjoy singing very much because it can easily express my emotions and it can help me relax.

动词enjoy后面应接动名词形式，原句中使用了seeing，正确应为singing。此外，句中有重复和拼写错误，需改正。

× I think that is a very good things.

✓ I think that is a very good thing.

thing是可数名词，前面有不定冠词a，应该用单数形式thing，而不是复数things。

× When we did did 2 feel good?

✓ When did we feel good?

疑问句中助动词did后面动词用原形，且重复了did，应删除多余的did。数字2应去掉。

× I've never learned how to sing but I taught myself saying like there's some online courses on all the websites I could.

✓ I've never learned how to sing but I taught myself singing, like there are some online courses on websites I could find.

teach的过去式是taught，后面接动词时应使用动名词形式singing。there's应改为there are，因为courses是复数。句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× So I think that is a very good things to do also.

✓ So I think that is a very good thing to do also.

thing是可数名词，前面有不定冠词a，应该用单数形式thing，而不是复数things。

× Because my friend, friends, they really bring me a lot of enjoyment and I like to hang out with them.

✓ Because my friends really bring me a lot of enjoyment and I like to hang out with them.

friend和friends不能混用，句中应使用复数friends与后文的they和them保持一致。

× And when I sing for them, we, we, we can feel closer because we can get some kind of engagement during singing.

✓ And when I sing for them, we can feel closer because we can get some kind of engagement during singing.

句中重复了we，应删除多余部分。动词形式singing使用正确。

× Yeah, of course, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because singing are allowing us to express ourselves and it could bring us closer.

✓ Yeah, of course, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because singing allows us to express ourselves and it can bring us closer.

singing是单数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式allows，而不是are allowing。could改为can更符合语境。

× For example, in the music festival's weak, all the crowds can seem together and it could be in bring a really happiness to ourselves.

✓ For example, in the music festival week, all the crowds can seem together and it can bring really happiness to us.

festival's weak应为festival week，crowds通常不加复数，改为crowd更合适。could be in bring结构错误，应改为can bring。happiness是不可数名词，前面不加a。ourselves改为us更符合表达。