Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, use correct grammar and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "No, I don't like chocolate."), give one or two specific reasons, and avoid repetition. Use correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "I don't like eating chocolate because it's too sweet. I've avoided sweets since I was a child.").

例: No, I don't like chocolate. It is too sweet for my taste, and I have avoided sugary foods since I was a child, so I rarely eat them now.

提案: Answer directly with frequency language and a short explanation. Use simple adverbs of frequency (never, rarely, sometimes) and one supporting reason. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and avoid long, confusing clauses.

例: I never eat chocolate. As I mentioned, I have disliked sweets for many years, so I avoid chocolate completely.

提案: Give a clear, past-focused response with correct tense and more precise wording. State the time period and reason for change briefly. Use linking words like "but" or "however" to show contrast.

例: Yes, I loved chocolate until I was about ten years old. However, after that I lost interest in sweets and stopped eating chocolate.

提案: Provide a broader, more realistic explanation with specific reasons and better grammar. Avoid inaccurate statistics. Mention factors like taste, affordability, marketing, and cultural traditions, and use linking words such as "because", "also", and "for example".

例: Chocolate is popular because it tastes good and is widely available. It is also often given as a treat or gift, and manufacturers market it heavily to children and adults alike.

提案: If you do not like chocolate, give a brief clear refusal and, if possible, mention a similar preference (e.g., prefer salty snacks) to keep the conversation going. Use correct phrasing and polite language.

例: I don't have a favourite chocolate flavour because I don't like chocolate. I prefer salty snacks like potato chips instead.

提案: Answer directly and add one or two specific reasons with a brief qualifying phrase. Use more natural phrases (e.g., "suitable for many occasions") and avoid overgeneralisation. Mention occasions and a small caveat if applicable.

例: Yes, chocolate makes a good gift because it is popular and easy to share. It suits many occasions such as birthdays and holidays, although you should avoid giving it to someone who is allergic or avoids sweets.

× I don't like eat chocolate because of sweets.

✓ I don't like eating chocolate because it's sweet.

Use of verb after 'like' requires the -ing form (gerund). Also 'because of sweets' is unnatural here; describe chocolate as 'sweet' or 'sweets' as plural noun differently. Suggestion: use 'like eating' or 'like to eat', and say 'because it's sweet' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Chocolate one of the type of sweet and I from young ages I didn't eat sweets and don't lie.

✓ Chocolate is one type of sweet, and since I was young I haven't eaten sweets, to be honest.

Missing verb 'is' after 'Chocolate' (there be/verb missing) and article usage: 'one of the type of sweet' should be 'one type of sweet' or 'one of the types of sweets'. 'From young ages' should be 'since I was young' and tense needs present perfect 'haven't eaten' to indicate up to now. 'Don't lie' likely intended 'to be honest' or 'I'm not lying'—use clearer phrase. Relevant grammar types: 'There be issue' and 'Sentence structure' and 'Tense'. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× Sorry, absolutely never because recently I answered no I didn't like chocolate for the last years I never tried to eat some sweets like chocolate and others.

✓ Sorry, never. As I said, I don't like chocolate; for the past years I have never tried sweets like chocolate or similar treats.

Use present perfect 'have never tried' for actions extending to the present. 'Recently I answered no' is awkward; rephrase to 'As I said'. Avoid double negatives and keep consistent tense. Also correct preposition use 'for the past years' or 'in recent years'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yeah, I had love chocolate for 10 years, from my birthday to 10 years old. After that I didn't try anymore.

✓ Yes, I loved chocolate until I was ten years old. After that I didn't try it anymore.

Use past simple 'loved' for a completed past state. 'Had love chocolate' is incorrect word order and use of 'had'. Express age as 'until I was ten years old'. 'Try' needs object 'it' (the chocolate). Use past simple 'didn't try'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Clearly it's because of children. Half of all people in the world are children. Children are allowed chocolate when you gave him chocolate as a gift.

✓ Clearly it's because children like it. Not half of the world's people are children. Children are often given chocolate as a gift.

Overgeneralization factually wrong; correct to 'children like it'. 'Children are allowed chocolate when you gave him chocolate' has pronoun and tense errors; use passive 'are given' and do not use 'him' for 'children'. Use present passive for general truth. Grammar types: pronoun use and passive/tense. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Yeah, recently I answered I didn't like chocolate from this. I can't answer for your favorite flower of chocolate because I don't like chocolate.

✓ I already said I don't like chocolate, so I can't say my favourite flavour of chocolate because I don't like it.

Awkward phrasing 'from this' and incorrect word 'flower' should be 'flavour'. Use 'favourite flavour' and refer with pronoun 'it'. Maintain tense consistency. Grammar types: word choice/adjective use and pronoun use. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Obviously, yeah, chocolate is the perfect gift for others because you can give chocolate for children, for your love, for your parents, it doesn't matter. It suits for all of them.

✓ Obviously, yes, chocolate is a perfect gift because you can give it to children, to your loved ones, or to your parents; it suits everyone.

Use 'give something to someone' not 'give for'. 'Your love' is unclear; use 'your loved ones'. 'It suits for all of them' should be 'it suits everyone' or 'it is suitable for everyone'. Article use: 'a perfect gift' acceptable. Grammar types: incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns and collocation. Grammar problem type ID: 11}]}