Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte, ar grammar thik korte. Apni 'it is give me' er jaygay 'it gives me' bolben. Ar 'in this time' er jaygay 'at that time' use korben. Erokom chhoto chhoto correction apnar answer ke natural r effective korbe.

例: I don't eat chocolate all the time, but I often have it after meals. Also, when I feel exhausted, I like to eat chocolate because it gives me relief from anxiety and frustration.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar r sentence structure problem ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje r shothik vabe bolte. 'it give me' er jaygay 'it gives me' bolben. 'concentrate my education' er jaygay 'concentrate on my studies' use korben. Linking words use korle answer ta aro logical hobe.

例: I usually eat chocolate when I feel exhausted during my studies because it gives me refreshment. Moreover, it boosts my energy level, so I can concentrate better on my studies.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar r word order er problem ache. Apni chesta korun simple r clear sentence bolte. 'had regularly eaten' er jaygay 'regularly ate' bolben. 'when I went to out from my home' er jaygay 'when I went out from home' bolben. 'please bought me' er jaygay 'please buy me' use korben.

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I regularly ate chocolate. Whenever I went out from home, I asked my mom or dad to please buy me some chocolates.

提案: Apni bhalo kichu point bolechen, kintu sentence gulo aro natural korte paren. 'refreshment from your anxiety' er jaygay 'relief from anxiety' use korben. Apni linking word 'because' er por sentence ke chhoto r clear rakhte paren.

例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because of its delicious taste. Also, it provides relief from anxiety when people feel stressed, which makes it very popular.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar r word choice problem ache. 'chocolate flavor' er jaygay 'chocolate flavor' or 'plain chocolate' bolte paren. 'mood swing' er jaygay 'mood swings' bolben. 'another flavors' er jaygay 'other flavors' use korben. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje r shothik vabe bolte.

例: Most of the time, I love to eat plain chocolate, but when I have mood swings, I like to try other flavors and eat different types of chocolates.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar r clarity problem ache. 'children's are mostly eat chocolate' er jaygay 'children mostly eat chocolate' bolben. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje r clear vabe bolte. Apni linking word 'because' er por sentence ke chhoto r clear rakhte paren.

例: Chocolate is usually a good gift, but not for everyone. Because children mostly eat chocolate, it can cause teeth problems. So, I think it can be a good gift sometimes, but not always.

× it is give me relief from anxiety and frustration

✓ it gives me relief from anxiety and frustration

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular present tense 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Using 'is give' is incorrect because 'give' is not the present participle form here.

× because it give me a refreshment and it's also boost my energy level

✓ because it gives me refreshment and it also boosts my energy level

The verbs 'give' and 'boost' should be in the third person singular present tense 'gives' and 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' and should be followed by a verb in third person singular form.

× I had regularly eaten chocolate

✓ I regularly ate chocolate

The past perfect tense 'had eaten' is unnecessary here; simple past tense 'ate' is appropriate to describe a habitual action in the past. Also, 'regularly' should come before the verb for correct adverb placement.

× when I went to out from my home

✓ when I went out from my home

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'out' in this context. The correct phrase is 'went out from my home'.

× children's are mostly eat chocolate

✓ children mostly eat chocolate

'Children' is already plural, so adding the possessive apostrophe 's' is incorrect. Also, 'are mostly eat' is incorrect verb form; it should be 'mostly eat'.