Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. For example, say "Yes, I like eating chocolate because it makes me happy." Also, avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise.

例: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it makes me happy and lifts my mood.

提案: Use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. Instead of "one time on my day," say "once a day" or "once a week" depending on your habit. Also, try to add a little detail to enrich your answer.

例: I usually eat chocolate once a week, especially during the weekends when I have free time.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity. "I wear a chocolate when I get" is unclear. You can say "Yes, I used to eat chocolate on special occasions, but not every day." Also, explain what "specific dates" means.

例: Yes, I used to eat chocolate on special occasions like birthdays and holidays, but not every day.

提案: Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "Chocolate is popular because it is affordable, tastes delicious, and can improve people's mood."

例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it is affordable, tastes delicious, and often makes people feel happier.

提案: Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Instead of "my favorite it's milk chocolate," say "my favorite is milk chocolate." You can also add a reason to enrich your answer.

例: I like all chocolate flavors, but my favorite is milk chocolate because it is smooth and creamy.

提案: Use correct grammar and more natural expressions. Instead of "it's great presents to give," say "it's a great gift to give." You can also explain why.

例: Yes, chocolate is a great gift to give because most people enjoy it and it shows thoughtfulness.

× Yes, I like to eat chocolate because it's make me happy.

✓ Yes, I like to eat chocolate because it makes me happy.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× Usually I eat chocolate one time on my day.

✓ Usually I eat chocolate one time a day.

The phrase 'on my day' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'a day' to indicate frequency. Also, 'one time a day' is the proper way to express this frequency.

× Yes, I wear a chocolate when I get but not every day.

✓ Yes, I ate chocolate when I was a kid but not every day.

The verb 'wear' is incorrect here; the past tense of 'eat' is 'ate', which fits the context. Also, 'when I get' is incomplete and should be 'when I was a kid' to indicate past time.

× There is specific dates.

✓ There are specific dates.

The subject 'dates' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Because it's not expensive and it tasted very good and change people mood to better.

✓ Because it's not expensive, it tastes very good and changes people's mood for the better.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'tasted' should be present tense 'tastes' to match 'it's'; 'change' should be 'changes' for third person singular; 'people mood' should be possessive 'people's mood'; and 'to better' should be 'for the better' for correct idiomatic expression.

× I like all chocolate flavors, but my favorite it's milk chocolate.

✓ I like all chocolate flavors, but my favorite is milk chocolate.

The phrase 'my favorite it's' is incorrect; it should be 'my favorite is' to properly link subject and predicate.

× Yes, it's great presents to give.

✓ Yes, they are great presents to give.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'presents'. The correct pronoun is 'they' to match the plural subject.