Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
受験者
Yes, actually I really like to eat chocolate because it is really delicious and my favorite chocolate is white chocolate.
試験官
How often do you eat chocolate?
受験者
I eaten chocolate twice a week.
試験官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
受験者
When I were a kid, I really love to eat chocolate.
試験官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
受験者
Because the taste of chocolate is very yummy and it smell is really good.
試験官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
受験者
My favorite favorite option that is white chocolate because it is sweet, delicious and I like to eat when I go out with my family.
試験官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
受験者
Yes, I think giving chocolate to other people for a person is is good thing to do.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
スコア: 70.0提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้นและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำ เช่น 'really' ซ้ำกัน และเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อทำให้คำตอบน่าสนใจขึ้น
例: Yes, I enjoy eating chocolate because it tastes delicious. My favorite type is white chocolate since it has a smooth and creamy flavor.
How often do you eat chocolate?
スコア: 60.0提案: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I eat' แทน 'I eaten' และเพิ่มคำอธิบายเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจ
例: I usually eat chocolate twice a week, especially during weekends when I have more free time.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
スコア: 60.0提案: ควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'When I was a kid' และ 'I really loved' และเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อขยายคำตอบ
例: When I was a kid, I really loved eating chocolate because it was a special treat for me.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
スコア: 65.0提案: ควรใช้คำที่เหมาะสมและถูกต้อง เช่น 'smell' ควรเป็น 'smell' หรือ 'aroma' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อทำให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์
例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it has a rich taste and a pleasant aroma that many people enjoy.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
スコア: 65.0提案: หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำคำ เช่น 'favorite favorite' และใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจน พร้อมเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล
例: My favorite flavor is white chocolate because it is sweet and delicious, and I enjoy eating it when I go out with my family.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
スコア: 60.0提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น 'giving chocolate to others is a good thing' และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำ 'is is'
例: Yes, I believe giving chocolate as a gift is a thoughtful and popular choice because many people like it.
文法
× I eaten chocolate twice a week.
✓ I eat chocolate twice a week.
The verb 'eaten' is the past participle form and requires an auxiliary verb like 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Since the sentence indicates a habitual action, the simple present tense 'eat' is appropriate here.
× When I were a kid, I really love to eat chocolate.
✓ When I was a kid, I really loved to eat chocolate.
The subject 'I' requires the past tense form 'was' instead of 'were'. Also, the verb 'love' should be in the past tense 'loved' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was a kid'.
× Because the taste of chocolate is very yummy and it smell is really good.
✓ Because the taste of chocolate is very yummy and its smell is really good.
The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used before 'smell'. The possessive pronoun 'its' should be used to indicate that the smell belongs to the chocolate.
× My favorite favorite option that is white chocolate because it is sweet, delicious and I like to eat when I go out with my family.
✓ My favorite option is white chocolate because it is sweet, delicious, and I like to eat it when I go out with my family.
The sentence has a repeated word 'favorite' which is redundant. Also, the phrase 'I like to eat when I go out' is incomplete; it needs the object 'it' to specify what is eaten.
× Yes, I think giving chocolate to other people for a person is is good thing to do.
✓ Yes, I think giving chocolate to other people is a good thing to do.
The phrase 'for a person' is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, there is a repeated 'is'. Removing 'for a person' and one 'is' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.
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