Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, neden çikolatayı sevdiğinizi daha spesifik detaylarla açıklamalısınız.

例: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it satisfies my sweet tooth and makes me feel happy.

提案: Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltmeli ve daha net bir sıklık belirtmelisiniz. Ayrıca, 'always' kelimesini doğru bağlamda kullanmalısınız.

例: I eat chocolate quite often, usually a few times a week.

提案: Geçmiş zaman kullanımı konusunda dikkatli olmalısınız ve cümlenizi daha doğal hale getirmelisiniz.

例: When I was a child, I used to eat chocolate every day.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var ve daha açıklayıcı, detaylı bir cevap vermelisiniz.

例: I believe chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and brings joy to many people.

提案: Cevabınızı daha açık ve doğru bir şekilde ifade etmelisiniz. Ayrıca, tercihinizi belirtmek için daha fazla detay ekleyebilirsiniz.

例: I don't have a favorite flavor, but I enjoy milk chocolate the most.

提案: Cümlenizi daha doğru ve anlaşılır hale getirmeli, fikirlerinizi net bir şekilde ifade etmelisiniz.

例: I think chocolate can be a good gift for others because many people like it, and I also enjoy receiving chocolates on my birthday.

× I like chocolates because I like desserts.

✓ I like chocolate because I like desserts.

The word 'chocolate' is generally uncountable when referring to the substance or food in general, so the singular form 'chocolate' is preferred over the plural 'chocolates' in this context.

× Unfortunately I always eating chocolates.

✓ Unfortunately I am always eating chocolate.

The verb 'eat' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'always' is better placed before the verb phrase. Additionally, 'chocolate' should be singular as it is uncountable here.

× Unfortunately I always eating chocolates.

✓ Unfortunately I am always eating chocolate.

Same as above: 'chocolate' is uncountable and should be singular.

× When I was child, I'm eating every day.

✓ When I was a child, I ate chocolate every day.

The phrase 'was child' is missing the article 'a'. Also, the tense should be past simple 'ate' to match 'when I was a child'. 'I'm eating' is present continuous and incorrect here.

× I think chocolate is very popular desserts because everybody loves chocolate.

✓ I think chocolate is a very popular dessert because everybody loves chocolate.

'Chocolate' is singular, so it should be followed by singular noun 'dessert' with the article 'a' instead of plural 'desserts'.

× I not choose, I'm sorry.

✓ I do not choose, I'm sorry.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation in present simple tense. 'I not choose' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not choose'.

× I not choose, I'm sorry.

✓ I don't choose, I'm sorry.

Alternatively, the contraction 'don't' can be used for 'do not' in informal speech.

× I think chocolate is worse for others gifts but I want chocolates in my birthday.

✓ I think chocolate is a bad gift for others, but I want chocolate on my birthday.

'Worse' is a comparative adjective and requires a comparison; here 'bad' is more appropriate. 'Others gifts' should be 'others' gifts' or better 'a gift for others'. Also, 'chocolates' should be 'chocolate' as uncountable. 'In my birthday' should be 'on my birthday'.