Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜好，但语法和表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，如“I really love chocolate, especially white chocolate because it tastes very sweet. I am not very fond of dark chocolate because it tastes a bit bitter.”这样更符合英语习惯。

例: I really love chocolate, especially white chocolate because it tastes very sweet. I am not very fond of dark chocolate because it tastes a bit bitter.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且重复。建议简化表达，避免重复，如“I don't usually eat snacks, so I seldom eat chocolate, even though I like the taste. For me, chocolate is not a necessary snack.”

例: I don't usually eat snacks, so I seldom eat chocolate, even though I like the taste. For me, chocolate is not a necessary snack.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议说“I often ate chocolate when I was a child, especially as a reward for my studies.”这样更准确自然。

例: I often ate chocolate when I was a child, especially as a reward for my studies.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰。建议使用更连贯的句子，如“I think it's obvious that chocolate tastes very good. In addition, chocolate advertising is popular worldwide, so almost everyone knows about it.”

例: I think it's obvious that chocolate tastes very good. In addition, chocolate advertising is popular worldwide, so almost everyone knows about it.

提案: 回答重复且有语法错误。建议简洁表达，如“My favourite flavour is white chocolate because it is sweeter than dark chocolate. I definitely prefer sweet chocolate.”

例: My favourite flavour is white chocolate because it is sweeter than dark chocolate. I definitely prefer sweet chocolate.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复。建议说“It depends on people's preferences. Before giving chocolate as a gift, you should know if the person likes it.”

例: It depends on people's preferences. Before giving chocolate as a gift, you should know if the person likes it.

× For sure I very love chocolate but I just love the white chocolate which is very sweet taste.

✓ For sure, I love chocolate very much but I just love white chocolate which has a very sweet taste.

The adverb 'very' is incorrectly placed before the verb 'love'. In English, 'very' usually modifies adjectives or adverbs, not verbs directly. The phrase 'very love' is incorrect; it should be 'love very much'. Also, 'the white chocolate which is very sweet taste' is awkward; it should be 'white chocolate which has a very sweet taste'.

× I don't so into the black chocolate which tastes a bit bitter.

✓ I am not so into black chocolate which tastes a bit bitter.

The phrase 'I don't so into' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I am not so into' to express lack of interest. Also, 'the black chocolate' is better as 'black chocolate' when speaking generally.

× I'm not going to lie, as I didn't have the habit of eating snacks so I seldom eat chocolate actually, although I love its taste.

✓ I'm not going to lie, as I didn't have the habit of eating snacks, so I seldom ate chocolate actually, although I love its taste.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the habit is in the past ('didn't have'), the action 'seldom eat' should be in past tense 'seldom ate' to maintain consistency.

× So for me, chocolate is not a very necessary snack for me.

✓ So for me, chocolate is not a very necessary snack.

The phrase 'for me' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the second 'for me' makes the sentence clearer and more natural.

× Yes, looking back, I I often eat chocolates, uh, when I was child and eating chocolate as a gift for my study.

✓ Yes, looking back, I often ate chocolates when I was a child and received chocolate as a gift for my studies.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match 'when I was a child'. Also, 'was child' is missing the article 'a'. 'Eating chocolate as a gift for my study' is awkward; it should be 'received chocolate as a gift for my studies'.

× I think it is no brainer that it tastes very good in additionally, umm, the advisement of chocolate is very popular around the world, so nearly every nearly everyone knows a knows the chocolate.

✓ I think it is a no-brainer that it tastes very good. Additionally, the advertisement of chocolate is very popular around the world, so nearly everyone knows the chocolate.

The phrase 'in additionally' is incorrect; 'additionally' should stand alone. 'Advisement' is a wrong word; the correct word is 'advertisement'. 'Nearly every nearly everyone' is redundant; 'nearly everyone' suffices. 'Knows a knows the chocolate' is incorrect; it should be 'knows the chocolate'.

× As I said, I love the white one which tastes more sweet than the black one.

✓ As I said, I love the white one which tastes sweeter than the black one.

The comparative form of 'sweet' is 'sweeter', not 'more sweet'. Using 'sweeter' is grammatically correct and more natural.

× So umm, when it comes to chocolate, I definitely choose the sweet 1.

✓ So umm, when it comes to chocolate, I definitely choose the sweet one.

Using the numeral '1' in this context is incorrect. The word 'one' should be used to refer to a choice or option.

× I think uh, uh, before you giving the gift, you need to know the favor of your, uh, of who are you going to send the gift.

✓ I think, uh, before you give the gift, you need to know the preference of the person you are going to send the gift to.

'Before you giving' is incorrect; it should be 'before you give'. 'Favor' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'preference'. The phrase 'of who are you going to send the gift' is ungrammatical; it should be 'the person you are going to send the gift to'.