Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意语法时态和单复数形式。可以先直接回答喜欢与否，再给出具体原因，保持句子简洁流畅。

例: No, I don't like eating chocolate because I find its flavor strange. Also, I am trying to lose weight, and chocolate has a lot of calories.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并用连词连接补充说明，避免语法错误。

例: I eat chocolate once or twice a year because I don't like it. Usually, my mother eats the chocolate instead.

提案: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，且表达重复。建议注意过去时态的正确使用，避免重复表达，句子结构应更清晰。

例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because my grandmother bought me very sweet chocolate. I liked it because I enjoy sweet tastes.

提案: 回答表达不完整且有语法错误，建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致和动词形式，补充具体原因使内容更丰富。

例: People around the world like chocolate because it makes them feel happy. It can also help people forget their worries for a while.

提案: 回答较为简洁，但表达略显重复。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅，同时丰富词汇。

例: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate. It's very sweet, and I like sweet things, so it's the only flavour I can eat.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的词汇表达节日和送礼的习俗，避免词语搭配错误。

例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift, especially on Valentine's Day. Couples often give flowers and chocolate to each other because chocolate symbolizes love.

× chocolate is have many calories so I don't like it.

✓ chocolate has many calories so I don't like it.

这里主语是不可数名词'chocolate'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'have'的正确形式是'has'。

× chocolate always was it eat it by my mother.

✓ chocolate was always eaten by my mother.

句子描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时态的被动语态，'was it eat it'结构错误，应改为'was always eaten'。

× I often ate chocolate when I were a kid

✓ I often ate chocolate when I was a kid

主语是第一人称单数'I'，过去时态中be动词应使用'was'而非'were'。

× and it can helps people forgetting some bad things and.

✓ and it can help people forget some bad things.

'can'后应接动词原形，'helps'应改为'help'；'forgetting'应改为'forget'；句尾多余的'and'应去掉。

× Milk. I like milk flavor of chocolate very much, and this is only one flavor that I can eat.

✓ Milk. I like the milk flavor of chocolate very much, and this is the only flavor that I can eat.

'milk flavor'前应加定冠词'the'表示特指；'only one flavor'前应加定冠词'the'。

× especially in volunteers day.

✓ especially on Volunteers Day.

表示具体日期时应使用介词'on'，且'Volunteers Day'应大写。

× The couples are the flowers always give the chocolate as a gift

✓ Couples and flowers always give chocolate as gifts

'couples'和'flowers'均为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'give'；'the chocolate'改为复数形式'chocolate'或' chocolates'，'as a gift'改为复数形式'as gifts'。