Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain your reason with simple and correct sentences. Avoid confusing phrases and focus on clarity. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas logically.

例: I don't like eating chocolate because it causes pimples on my face. When I eat even a small piece, I have to see a doctor and take medicine, which is difficult for me.

提案: Answer the question directly with correct grammar and clear meaning. Avoid contradictory statements. Use simple present tense and explain your frequency clearly.

例: I rarely eat chocolate because I know it is bad for my health.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using correct grammar. Use linking words like 'and' or 'but' to connect ideas. Avoid incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid. I used to buy a piece every day with my sisters. However, I now understand that eating too much chocolate has disadvantages.

提案: Make sure your answer is complete and clear. Use simple and relevant vocabulary to explain your ideas. For example, mention taste, availability, or cultural reasons for chocolate's popularity.

例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and many people enjoy it. Also, it is easy to find in many countries.

提案: Give a clear answer and explain your preference with simple reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas.

例: My favourite flavour is white chocolate because many people like dark chocolate, so I prefer something different. I also enjoy vanilla-flavored chocolate.

提案: Answer directly and explain your opinion clearly. Use correct sentence structure and linking words like 'because'. Avoid incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it lasts longer than flowers. Flowers usually die within a few days, but chocolate can be enjoyed for a longer time.

× If you are talking about the size of like or a dislike eating of chocolate, I am with dislike because if I eat a piece a short a small pieces of chocolate, it's an appear pills on my face and I should visit the doctor and talk to the doctor, take a medicine and that thing is more difficult to me because I'm feeling straight.

✓ If you are talking about liking or disliking eating chocolate, I dislike it because if I eat a small piece of chocolate, pimples appear on my face and I have to visit the doctor, talk to the doctor, take medicine, and that is difficult for me because I feel stressed.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers such as 'a piece a short a small pieces' which is confusing and incorrect. Use 'a small piece' to correctly quantify chocolate. Also, 'an appear pills' is incorrect; it should be 'pimples appear'. Proper quantifiers and noun forms improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm usually eating chocolate because chocolate is bad and worth our health.

✓ I usually eat chocolate even though chocolate is bad for our health.

The phrase 'I'm usually eating' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense for a habitual action. Habitual actions should use the simple present tense, e.g., 'I usually eat'. Also, 'worth our health' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bad for our health'.

× Absolutely yes. My main meal for the day is a chocolate and I still remember until today that I was went to grocery with my sisters to buy a piece of chocolate daily. But I think about the disadvantage and.

✓ Absolutely yes. My main meal of the day was chocolate and I still remember that I went to the grocery store with my sisters to buy a piece of chocolate daily. But I think about the disadvantages now.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'is' instead of past tense 'was' for a past habit. Also, 'I was went' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I went'. 'Grocery' should be 'grocery store'. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× Chocolate is popular around the world because. It is with the celery of the chocolate with the hand of a lot of people. For that reason I think many.

✓ Chocolate is popular around the world because many people enjoy it. For that reason, I think it is widely loved.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'It is with the celery of the chocolate with the hand of a lot of people' is nonsensical. Proper sentence structure and clear expression are necessary for understanding.

× My favorite flavor for chocolate is the white chocolate. I prefer to eat the white one because a lot of people eating the dark chocolate or the chocolate itself. It is an favorite taste for that reason. I'm trying to eat the vanilla type of joke.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is white chocolate. I prefer to eat the white one because many people eat dark chocolate or regular chocolate. It is a favorite taste; for that reason, I try to eat the vanilla type of chocolate.

The sentence misuses 'an favorite' instead of 'a favorite'. Also, 'a lot of people eating' should be 'many people eat' for correct tense and subject-verb agreement. 'Type of joke' is likely a typo for 'type of chocolate'. Correct adjective and noun usage improves clarity.

× Yes, if you are think about that gift, it is to me, I prefer the chocolate rather than the flower. The flower, the bouquet of flower will die into two, two to four hours and the chocolate will stay and remain for.

✓ Yes, if you think about that gift, for me, I prefer chocolate rather than flowers. The bouquet of flowers will die in two to four hours, but chocolate will last longer.

The phrase 'if you are think' is incorrect; it should be 'if you think' using the simple present tense. Also, 'the flower' should be plural 'flowers' when referring to bouquets. Modal verbs and verb forms must be used correctly for proper meaning.