Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều câu không đúng ngữ pháp và ý không được truyền đạt rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và logic.

例: I don't like eating chocolate because it is too sweet for me. I prefer to avoid it to maintain my mental health.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa bị mơ hồ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp tần suất ăn chocolate và giải thích rõ ràng, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I rarely eat chocolate because my family encourages healthy eating habits, especially when I am sick.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, giải thích rõ ràng về thói quen ăn chocolate khi còn nhỏ.

例: I didn't often eat chocolate when I was a kid because my family didn't allow it. Instead, I ate cookies and baguettes.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên giải thích rõ lý do tại sao chocolate phổ biến, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes good and is widely available in supermarkets, especially appealing to children.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về hương vị yêu thích và giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng.

例: I have never eaten chocolate before, but I think I would like the original flavor because it is classic and popular.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do tại sao chocolate có thể hoặc không thể là món quà tốt, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng.

例: I don't think chocolate is the best gift because some children don't like it and it can be expensive for some people.

× I don't like eating chocolate because my eat chocolate is so too sweet.

✓ I don't like eating chocolate because the chocolate I eat is too sweet.

The original sentence misuses 'my eat chocolate' which is not a correct phrase. It should be 'the chocolate I eat' to correctly describe the chocolate. Also, 'so too sweet' is redundant; 'too sweet' is sufficient.

× My to sleep is my type.

✓ My favorite type is dark chocolate.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. 'My to sleep is my type' does not convey a clear meaning. A proper sentence should specify the type of chocolate preferred.

× I trying to mental healthiness and I avoid 2 chocolates in my main.

✓ I am trying to improve my mental health and I avoid eating chocolates mainly.

The verb 'trying' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'Mental healthiness' is incorrect; 'mental health' is the correct term. 'Avoid 2 chocolates in my main' is unclear; it should be 'avoid eating chocolates mainly' or similar.

× I'll never eat so good when I was ill because my family don't allow me eat chocolate because my family following healthy death and my I eat chocolate in large.

✓ I never ate chocolate when I was ill because my family didn't allow me to eat chocolate since they follow a healthy diet, and I eat chocolate in large amounts.

'I'll never eat so good when I was ill' mixes future and past tenses incorrectly. It should be past tense 'I never ate'. 'Don't allow me eat' should be 'didn't allow me to eat'. 'Following healthy death' is incorrect; it should be 'following a healthy diet'. 'My I eat chocolate in large' is unclear; corrected to 'I eat chocolate in large amounts'.

× I think eye level is so good when I was a kid because my family don't don't allow me eat chocolate and they allow me eat cookie and baguette.

✓ I think my eyesight was good when I was a kid because my family didn't allow me to eat chocolate, but they allowed me to eat cookies and baguettes.

'Don't don't allow me eat' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't allow me to eat'. 'Cookie and baguette' should be plural 'cookies and baguettes'. 'Eye level' is likely a mistranslation; 'eyesight' fits better.

× I think chocolate is very popular around the world. In many country chocolates have a shout out in a very in a supermarket and store, so children and so so children.

✓ I think chocolate is very popular around the world. In many countries, chocolates are displayed prominently in supermarkets and stores, so children see them often.

'In many country' should be 'in many countries'. 'Have a shout out in a very in a supermarket and store' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'are displayed prominently in supermarkets and stores'. The repetition 'so children and so so children' is removed for clarity.

× I never eat chocolate before, but I think I like original chocolate because it. Is Chinese snow and everything in the world.

✓ I have never eaten chocolate before, but I think I would like original chocolate because it is popular worldwide.

'I never eat chocolate before' should be present perfect 'I have never eaten chocolate before'. 'It. Is Chinese snow and everything in the world' is unclear and incorrect; replaced with a meaningful phrase.

× I think that's the school This chocolate is bad best idea for gift because many children don't like chocolates and chocolates is very very expensive for many people.

✓ I think that chocolate is a bad idea for a gift because many children don't like chocolates and chocolates are very expensive for many people.

'That's the school This chocolate' is incorrect and unclear; simplified to 'chocolate is a bad idea'. 'Bad best idea' is contradictory; corrected to 'bad idea'. 'Chocolates is' should be 'chocolates are' for subject-verb agreement.