Part 1
試験官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
受験者
I like eating chocolate a great deal because it can be a mood booster for me when I'm feeling down. Also, I have a sweet tooth so it perfectly satisfied my cravings and my appetite. For example, after a busy day studying, I'll instantly lift my mood.
試験官
How often do you eat chocolate?
受験者
I don't eat chocolates frequently because I'm currently on a diet, so avoiding sweets can help me lose weight. However, after exercising, I treat myself a piece of chocolate so that I can regain energy and feel motivated.
試験官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
受験者
Yes, I did. Chocolate was definitely one of my favorite treats when I was in childhood. I especially love chocolate milk because it tastes like a perfect blend of creamy milk and a rich chocolate. I used to drink it every day after school to keep myself motivated and energetic.
試験官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
受験者
To begin with, cacao, being one of the main ingredients of chocolates, is available in many different regions because they are adaptable plants. Additionally, chocolates can stimulate the the the dopamine of people's mind, making people happy and relaxed. Umm yeah.
試験官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
受験者
I don't have a specific, uh, favorite flavor because I really enjoy the original 1. I believe that the classic chocolate flavor brings back nostalgic memories. For example, umm, when I was eating chocolate, uh, reminds me of my childhood and uh, how I enjoy it simply.
試験官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
受験者
I think it depends. On the one hand, chocolate can be well decorated and customized into different shapes that suits the recipient's preferences. On the other hand, chocolates can melt easily, especially in scorching hot days, which makes which makes it less practical.
× I don't eat chocolates frequently because I'm currently on a diet, so avoiding sweets can help me lose weight.
✓ I don't eat chocolate frequently because I'm currently on a diet, so avoiding sweets can help me lose weight.
在这里,'chocolate'作为不可数名词使用,表示巧克力这种物质,而不是具体的巧克力块。因此应使用单数形式'chocolate',而不是复数'chocolates'。
× On the one hand, chocolate can be well decorated and customized into different shapes that suits the recipient's preferences.
✓ On the one hand, chocolate can be well decorated and customized into different shapes that suit the recipient's preferences.
关系代词that指代复数名词'different shapes',因此谓语动词应使用复数形式'suit',而不是单数'suits'。
× Additionally, chocolates can stimulate the the the dopamine of people's mind, making people happy and relaxed.
✓ Additionally, chocolates can stimulate the dopamine in people's minds, making people happy and relaxed.
这里'dopamine'前多余重复了'the',应删除多余的定冠词。同时,'people's mind'应改为复数形式'people's minds',因为指的是多个人的脑。
× Additionally, chocolates can stimulate the the the dopamine of people's mind, making people happy and relaxed.
✓ Additionally, chocolates can stimulate dopamine in people's minds, making people happy and relaxed.
在科学术语中,通常不加定冠词'the',直接说'stimulate dopamine'更自然。
× On the one hand, chocolate can be well decorated and customized into different shapes that suits the recipient's preferences.
✓ On the one hand, chocolate can be well decorated and customized into different shapes that suit the recipient's preferences.
关系代词that指代复数名词'different shapes',谓语动词应使用复数形式'suit',而不是单数'suits'。