Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
受験者
Actually, I love eating chocolate. Chocolate is one of my favorite snacks since I was a little kid and I love sweetness. I don't like any sour thing or anything. So yeah, of course chocolate is my favorite snack.
試験官
How often do you eat chocolate?
受験者
Since I love chocolate and it's my favorite snack, as I mentioned before, I would take it like every day in different forms. I might eat a bar of chocolate or like a chocolatey snack.
試験官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
受験者
Actually, I don't think so. I don't think that I had the amount of chocolate that I'm having right now, but I still did eat chocolate, you know?
試験官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
受験者
I think it's because of its big variety. It comes in different shapes, in different flavors. There are a lot of ways to consume it, so I think that's the reason why everyone love it.
試験官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
受験者
Umm, actually I love all of the flavors uh, but my most liked 1 is probably the milk chocolate uh, because I think it will be good tasting with everything and also by its own so.
試験官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
受験者
In my opinion it depends on the occasion, like if you're going to see someone or if you're going to like your friends house for the first time. I think it's OK to bring chocolates for them.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is clear and natural, but it could be more concise and structured. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'love' and 'favorite snack' multiple times. Try to start with a direct answer, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words for coherence.
例: Yes, I love eating chocolate because it has a sweet taste that I enjoy. Since childhood, it has been my favorite treat, and I prefer it over sour snacks.
How often do you eat chocolate?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is understandable but a bit informal and repetitive. Avoid phrases like 'as I mentioned before' in speaking tests. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more precise about frequency.
例: I eat chocolate almost every day, either as a chocolate bar or in other chocolate-flavored snacks because I really enjoy it.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is somewhat vague and informal. Try to give a clear direct answer first, then explain with specific details. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and use linking words to improve coherence.
例: Not really. I didn't eat as much chocolate as I do now, but I did enjoy it occasionally when I was a child.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
スコア: 80.0提案: Good content with specific reasons. To improve, use more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammar errors like 'everyone love' to 'everyone loves'.
例: I believe chocolate is popular worldwide because it comes in many varieties, such as different shapes and flavors. Moreover, there are numerous ways to enjoy it, which makes it appealing to many people.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
スコア: 60.0提案: Your answer is too informal and contains filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'good tasting with everything'. Provide specific reasons and use linking words.
例: I like all chocolate flavors, but my favorite is milk chocolate because it has a smooth taste that pairs well with many foods and is enjoyable on its own.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be more structured and formal. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid informal phrases like 'like your friends house'. Be more specific about occasions.
例: I think chocolate can be a good gift depending on the occasion. For example, it is appropriate to bring chocolates when visiting someone's home for the first time or as a small gesture of appreciation.
文法
× I think that's the reason why everyone love it.
✓ I think that's the reason why everyone loves it.
The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' to agree in number. Using 'love' is incorrect because it is the base form used with plural subjects.
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