Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu word use kora hoyeche jeta natural English e thik na. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, jemon 'I love eating chocolate because I like sweet things, especially sweets made from chocolate.'

例: I love eating chocolate because it is sweet and delicious, especially chocolates that are made with rich cocoa.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu sentence structure ar word choice improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun clear ar logical sentence banate, jemon 'I eat chocolate regularly, especially when I go out shopping. I usually buy some chocolates and eat them on my way home.'

例: I eat chocolate regularly, especially when I go shopping. I usually buy some chocolates and enjoy eating them on my way back home.

提案: Apni past tense use korte bhul kore present tense use korechen. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache. Apni chesta korun simple ar direct answer dite, jemon 'Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because it was a small treat that made me happy.'

例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because it was a small treat that made me happy.

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar ar word choice improve korte paren. Apni chesta korun clear ar logical sentence banate, jemon 'I think chocolate is popular because it tastes sweet and it helps people feel relaxed and refreshed.'

例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and helps people feel calm and refreshed.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar sentence structure mistake ache. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, jemon 'My favourite flavour of chocolate is vanilla because it is sweet and looks delicious with its white color.'

例: My favourite flavour of chocolate is vanilla because it is sweet and looks delicious with its white color.

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar ar word choice improve korte paren. Apni chesta korun clear ar natural sentence banate, jemon 'Yes, chocolate is a great gift because most people like it and it makes them happy when they receive it.'

例: Yes, chocolate is a great gift because most people like it and it makes them happy when they receive it.

× Chocolate are really based on some sweet things and I like sweet most, especially the items which are made from the suite.

✓ Chocolate is really based on some sweet things and I like sweets most, especially the items which are made from the sweet.

The word 'Chocolate' is singular and should be followed by 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'sweet' as a noun referring to sweet items should be pluralized to 'sweets'. The word 'suite' seems to be a typo and corrected to 'sweet'.

× Then I do corner to chocolate and chewing them and get back my home.

✓ Then I go to the corner shop to buy chocolate, chew them, and get back home.

The phrase 'do corner to chocolate' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go to the corner shop' or 'corner store' to buy chocolate. Also, 'get back my home' should be 'get back home'.

× Yes, I regularly eat chocolate.

✓ Yes, I regularly ate chocolate.

The question is about past habits ('when you were a kid'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'ate' instead of present tense 'eat'.

× I like the vanilla most among them vanilla which is made from the sweeter things and it's look white and looking so delicious.

✓ I like vanilla the most among them; vanilla is made from sweet things and it looks white and looks so delicious.

The phrase 'the vanilla most among them vanilla' is awkward; it should be 'vanilla the most among them'. 'It's look' is incorrect; it should be 'it looks'. Also, 'looking so delicious' should be 'looks so delicious'.

× Yes, chocolate are the best thing for gift.

✓ Yes, chocolate is the best thing for a gift.

'Chocolate' is singular and should be followed by 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'for gift' should be 'for a gift' to be grammatically correct.