Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且有些重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

例: No, I don't like eating chocolate because I find it too sweet, especially dark chocolate, which tastes a bit bitter to me.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达混乱，建议用连贯的句子直接回答问题，避免重复和不必要的插入语。

例: I rarely eat chocolate because I don't like its taste. In fact, I have only tried it once and haven't eaten it since then.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用不当。建议直接回答问题，并用简单明了的句子表达过去的习惯。

例: No, I didn't often eat chocolate when I was a kid because I preferred fruits and other natural foods instead.

提案: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it can make people feel happy. Many studies have shown that eating chocolate releases chemicals that improve mood.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，且不够具体。建议直接回答问题，并用清晰的语言表达偏好。

例: I don't have a favorite chocolate flavor because I don't like chocolate. Instead, I prefer fresh fruits for their natural taste.

提案: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意语法准确性，并简洁表达观点。

例: Yes, I think chocolate makes a good gift because many people love it. Also, some dark chocolates are quite expensive, which makes them special presents.

× About chocolate IK specially black chocolate because I think it is little bit gross and too sweet for me.

✓ About chocolate, I especially like black chocolate because I think it is a little bit gross and too sweet for me.

这里'specially'应为'especially'，且缺少冠词'a'，'little bit'前应加冠词'a'。此外，句子结构不完整，需调整。

× As I mentioned before. I don't like the taste of chocolate so I only tried one time and after that I never ate chocolate ever because I don't like its taste.

✓ As I mentioned before, I don't like the taste of chocolate so I only tried it one time and after that I have never eaten chocolate because I don't like its taste.

'tried one time'应为'tried it one time'，且'never ate'应使用现在完成时'have never eaten'表示从过去到现在的经历。

× Oh, so I don't like the chocolate favors? Things. Foods, either.

✓ Oh, so I don't like chocolate flavors or foods either.

'favors'应为'flavors'，且'Things. Foods,'表达不清，应合并为'flavors or foods'。

× Now because I don't like eating chocolate so. I won't try any chocolate flavors food either.

✓ Now, because I don't like eating chocolate, I won't try any chocolate-flavored food either.

句子中'won't try'使用正确，但'flavors food'应改为'chocolate-flavored food'，形容词用法错误。

× Because I don't like it and I prefer some fruits or some velen. Not flavors things for me in child.

✓ Because I don't like it and I prefer some fruits or some vegetables. Not flavored things for me as a child.

'velen'应为'vegetables'，'flavors things'应为'flavored things'，且'for me in child'表达不正确，应为'as a child'。

× I think one of the main reason is. I've watched several's research is said that people it chocolate can make people eating chocolate can make people happy here.

✓ I think one of the main reasons is that I've watched several researches which say that eating chocolate can make people happy here.

句子结构混乱，'several's research is said'不正确，应为'several researches which say'，且句子需调整使其通顺。

× So I think that's the main reason why is popular around the world.

✓ So I think that's the main reason why it is popular around the world.

缺少主语'it'，导致句子不完整。

× People really enjoy it because it gives them happy.

✓ People really enjoy it because it makes them happy.

'gives them happy'用法错误，应为'makes them happy'，动词搭配错误。

× I prefer the fruits which gives me fresher Ann. Good taste, so if I have to choose the flavor I would definitely pick a throat once instead of chocolate flake.

✓ I prefer fruits which give me a fresher and better taste, so if I have to choose a flavor, I would definitely pick a grape one instead of chocolate flakes.

'fruits which gives'主谓不一致，应为'give'；'fresher Ann'应为'a fresher and better taste'；'throat once'应为'grape one'；'chocolate flake'应为'chocolate flakes'。

× Yes, I think is it is a good choice to to use chocolate as a gift because most people loves chocolate Anne.

✓ Yes, I think it is a good choice to use chocolate as a gift because most people love chocolate.

'is it is'重复，应删去多余部分；'to to'重复；'loves'应为'love'与主语people一致；'Anne'无意义，应删除。

× Some dark chocolate is expensive so I think it's definitely be a good gifts for people.

✓ Some dark chocolate is expensive, so I think it's definitely a good gift for people.

'definitely be'用法错误，应为'definitely a good gift'；'gifts'应为单数形式'gift'与前文一致。