Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with simple sentences. For example, say you don't like chocolate because it has too much sugar and you prefer spicy food. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

例: I don't like eating chocolate because it contains a lot of sugar, which is not good for my health. Instead, I prefer spicy food because it suits my taste better.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, explain how often you eat chocolate and why you avoid it, then mention your preference for spicy food.

例: I don't eat chocolate very often because it has a lot of sugar, which is unhealthy for me. Instead, I enjoy eating spicy foods because they are more suitable for my taste.

提案: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to answer clearly by stating whether you ate chocolate often as a child and why. Use simple past tense and clear reasons.

例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I did not know much about its sugar content. At that time, I thought it tasted good and was enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant words. Try to give a clear reason why chocolate is popular, such as its sweet taste and attraction to children. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because many people enjoy its sweet taste. Also, children are especially attracted to chocolate, which makes it a favorite treat for all ages.

提案: Your answer is confusing and hard to understand. Try to clearly state your favorite chocolate flavor and describe it briefly. Avoid unrelated words and focus on clear expression.

例: My favorite flavor of chocolate is spicy chocolate. It has a unique taste that combines sweetness with a little heat, which I enjoy very much.

提案: Your answer is short and has grammatical errors. Try to give a complete sentence with reasons why chocolate is a good gift. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift option because many people like it. It is a popular and thoughtful present for different occasions.

× Oh, actually I don't like chocolate because it contains. 2 girls.

✓ Oh, actually I don't like chocolate because it contains sugar.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The phrase 'it contains. 2 girls.' is incorrect and does not make sense. The intended meaning is likely that chocolate contains sugar, which is why the student dislikes it. The sentence structure needs to be corrected to convey this meaning clearly.

× That's why I avoid this food because I like it.

✓ That's why I avoid this food because I don't like it.

The sentence contradicts itself by saying the student avoids the food because they like it. The correct meaning is that the student avoids the food because they do not like it. The sentence structure needs to be corrected to reflect this.

× Spicy food in spicy foods, sugars didn't. His Dr. for body. That's why I like.

✓ I like spicy food because it doesn't contain sugar, which is better for my body.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It seems the student wants to say they like spicy food because it doesn't contain sugar and is better for their body. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't often eat chocolate because chocolate contains many sugars are if their unhealthier things for my body and I avoid these.

✓ No, I don't often eat chocolate because chocolate contains a lot of sugar and other unhealthy things for my body, so I avoid it.

The original sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and sentence structure. 'Are if their unhealthier things' is incorrect. The correction uses proper modal verb and conjunctions to express the reason clearly.

× I like a spicy foods it's. I enjoyed it.

✓ I like spicy foods. I enjoy them.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect verb tense. 'It's' is incorrect here, and 'enjoyed' should be present tense to match the context. The sentence is corrected for proper structure and tense.

× I like chocolate when I was kid because that's time I didn't know about the chocolate and this time sugars.

✓ I liked chocolate when I was a kid because at that time I didn't know about the sugar in chocolate.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'a kid' needs the article 'a'. The sentence is corrected for past tense and article usage.

× That's why I often eating.

✓ That's why I often eat it.

The verb 'eating' is incorrectly used here. After 'often', the base form 'eat' should be used, not the '-ing' form. The sentence is corrected accordingly.

× Chocolate is popular around the world because many people are like the chocolate for each Sumner forest loop, and it's a.

✓ Chocolate is popular around the world because many people like it, especially during summer festivals.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'Sumner forest loop'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× It stays especially children are children are many attractive for the chocolate and it's like.

✓ It is especially attractive to children, and they like it a lot.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is spicy chocolate like Mr. Mango on their skin, that's a spicy chocolate is the.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is spicy chocolate, like the one with mango on its skin.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Call sometime. It's called Who's me candy and each summer fabric chocolate I eat.

✓ It's called 'Who's Me' candy, and I eat this chocolate every summer.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines them into a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× Yes, this a better gift option for me because because. Many people are like chocolate and. Obviously is. An option of gift.

✓ Yes, this is a better gift option for me because many people like chocolate. Obviously, it is a good gift choice.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain repetition and incorrect structure. The correction provides clear, complete sentences with proper grammar.