Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
受験者
Yes, I like it. Chocolate because when I hungry is so cool.
試験官
How often do you eat chocolate?
受験者
I eat chocolate everyday, he's so sweet and delicious.
試験官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
受験者
Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid. It's so delicious and so sweet.
試験官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
受験者
I see. He's so sweet and delicious.
試験官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
受験者
My favorite flavor is chocolate is Milky is so sweet and delicious.
試験官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
受験者
I think gives chocolate to this Tuesday, Thursday. He's so cool.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
スコア: 40.0提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Следует использовать полные предложения и объяснять причину, почему вам нравится шоколад, избегая неясных выражений.
例: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it satisfies my hunger and tastes delicious.
How often do you eat chocolate?
スコア: 50.0提案: Используйте правильные местоимения и избегайте повторений. Ответ должен быть более естественным и содержать связные предложения.
例: I eat chocolate every day because I enjoy its sweet and delicious taste.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить больше деталей и использовать связующие слова для улучшения связности.
例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because it was a tasty treat that I really enjoyed.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
スコア: 30.0提案: Ответ не соответствует вопросу. Нужно объяснить причины популярности шоколада в мире, используя полные предложения и конкретные детали.
例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and delicious, and many people enjoy it as a treat.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
スコア: 45.0提案: Ответ должен быть более грамматически правильным и содержать связные предложения. Следует четко назвать любимый вкус и объяснить почему.
例: My favorite flavor of chocolate is milky chocolate because it is sweet and creamy.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
スコア: 20.0提案: Ответ не ясен и не соответствует вопросу. Нужно выразить мнение о шоколаде как подарке, используя полные и логичные предложения.
例: Yes, I think giving chocolate as a gift is a good idea because many people like it and it shows you care.
文法
× Chocolate because when I hungry is so cool.
✓ I like chocolate because when I am hungry, it is so good.
The original sentence lacks a main verb and proper sentence structure. 'When I hungry' is missing the verb 'am' to form the correct present tense. Also, 'is so cool' is unclear; 'it is so good' better expresses the intended meaning.
× I eat chocolate everyday, he's so sweet and delicious.
✓ I eat chocolate every day; it is so sweet and delicious.
The pronoun 'he's' incorrectly refers to chocolate, which is an inanimate object and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'everyday' is an adjective, but the adverb 'every day' is correct here.
× I think gives chocolate to this Tuesday, Thursday.
✓ I think giving chocolate on Tuesday and Thursday is good.
The original sentence misuses the verb form after 'think'. The gerund 'giving' is needed to express the action. Also, 'to this Tuesday, Thursday' is incorrect preposition usage; 'on Tuesday and Thursday' is correct.
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