Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases like "jar lids give me satisfaction" which may confuse the listener. Also, avoid repeating phrases such as "in a certain study". Use simple and clear language to explain why you like chocolate.

例: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it helps me feel relaxed during stressful times. For example, when I have a lot of work, eating chocolate cheers me up and reduces my stress.

提案: Answer directly with a clear frequency, then explain the reason using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid incomplete sentences and pauses. Make your answer coherent and logical.

例: I usually eat chocolate once or twice a month because I buy it when I feel stressed. So, I don't eat it regularly, only during those times.

提案: Provide a complete and clear answer. Start with a direct response, then add specific details. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "because" to explain your situation.

例: No, I did not often eat chocolate as a kid because my family had limited money. I only ate chocolate when my aunts or uncles gave some to me.

提案: Make sure to pronounce words clearly, for example, "chocolate" instead of "college". Give a direct answer and support it with specific reasons using linking words like "because". Keep your sentences complete and clear.

例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes good and can help relieve stress. Many people enjoy eating it to feel happier and more relaxed.

提案: Give a clear and complete answer. Start with your favourite flavour, then explain why you like it. Avoid incomplete sentences and hesitations. Use linking words like "because" to connect your ideas.

例: My favourite flavour is plain chocolate because I enjoy its rich and smooth taste. However, I also like chocolate with peanuts because it adds a crunchy texture.

提案: Provide a clear and complete answer. Explain why chocolate is a good gift using specific reasons and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "importing gives our gum comforting food". Use simple and correct expressions.

例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it makes people happy. Chocolate is a comforting food that many people enjoy receiving as a present.

× I do like eating chocolates because jar lids give me satisfaction during stressful moments and it's not always.

✓ I do like eating chocolate because jar lids give me satisfaction during stressful moments and it's not always.

The word 'chocolates' is plural, but here it refers to chocolate in general, which is uncountable, so the singular form 'chocolate' is appropriate.

× It's not only based on my experience but it was also stated in any certain studies in a certain study that chocolate.

✓ It's not only based on my experience but it was also stated in certain studies that chocolate.

The phrase 'any certain studies in a certain study' is redundant and incorrect. 'Certain studies' is sufficient and clearer.

× I eat chocolates during the times that I feel stressed so I tend to buy chocolates.

✓ I eat chocolate during the times that I feel stressed so I tend to buy chocolate.

'Chocolate' is an uncountable noun when referring to the substance in general, so the singular form is correct here.

× So I think once a month or twice a month is. Is the time where when I eat chocolate and.

✓ So I think once or twice a month is when I eat chocolate.

The original sentence is fragmented and redundant. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× Since we don't have enough money during my childhood days, I usually eat chocolates when my aunts or uncles gave some to us and it is also the time.

✓ Since we didn't have enough money during my childhood days, I usually ate chocolate when my aunts or uncles gave some to us, and it was also the time.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Don't have' should be 'didn't have' and 'eat' should be 'ate' to match the past context.

× Where I, I where I? When I.

✓ [Sentence incomplete and unclear; unable to correct without additional context.]

The sentence is incomplete and unclear, making correction impossible without further context.

× I think college are popular.

✓ I think chocolate is popular.

'College' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'chocolate' which is singular, so 'is' is used.

× Not just here in the Philippines but all over the world.

✓ Not just here in the Philippines but all over the world.

This sentence fragment is acceptable as a continuation; no correction needed.

× It's because of some benefits it can give to people like it can relieve stress when you are. When you feel stressed.

✓ It's because of some benefits it can give to people, like relieving stress when you feel stressed.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. The correction combines the ideas into a clear sentence.

× Definitely a chocolate flavor.

✓ Definitely chocolate flavor.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'chocolate flavor' when used as a preference statement.

× I want it to just a chocolate.

✓ I want it to be just chocolate.

The original sentence is ungrammatical; 'to be just chocolate' correctly expresses the desire.

× But, uh, some sprinkled the peanuts.

✓ But, uh, some sprinkled peanuts on it.

The verb 'sprinkled' requires an object and a preposition to indicate where the peanuts are sprinkled.

× I will also do.

✓ I will also do that.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'that' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I think so, because if someone gives you chocolate.

✓ Yes, I think so, because if someone gives you chocolate,

The sentence is incomplete; a comma indicates continuation.

× They will become very happy because chocolate is such a comforting.

✓ They will become very happy because chocolate is such a comforting food.

The adjective 'comforting' needs a noun to modify; adding 'food' completes the phrase.

× Importing gives our gum comforting food that you can give to a certain person and.

✓ Importing gives our gum comforting food that you can give to a certain person.

The sentence is unclear and seems to have errors; 'Importing gives our gum' is likely incorrect. Possibly intended: 'Importantly, chocolate gives us comforting food that you can give to a certain person.' Without clarification, correction is limited.