Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit short and could be more natural. Try to add a linking phrase and a little more detail to explain your opinion.

例: I don't really like eating chocolate because it is too sweet for me. For example, I prefer snacks that are less sugary and more savory.

提案: Your answer is very brief and a bit unclear. Try to give a complete sentence and explain why you eat chocolate so rarely.

例: I eat chocolate very rarely, maybe only twice a year, because I try to avoid sweets for health reasons.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and is fragmented. Try to use a complete sentence and correct tense, and add a reason.

例: I didn't eat chocolate often when I was a kid because I didn't like the taste of it.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and give specific reasons.

例: I think chocolate is popular around the world because many people enjoy its sweet taste and it is often given as a gift on special occasions.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Try to clearly state your favorite flavor and explain why.

例: I'm not very familiar with different types of chocolate, but I think my favorite would be the original milk chocolate because it has a smooth and creamy taste.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has grammar errors. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I think chocolate is a great gift because most people love sweets, and it is something they can enjoy easily.

× Just maybe. Twice a year.

✓ Just maybe twice a year.

The original response is fragmented into two incomplete sentences. Combining them into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I didn't eat chocolate because. I don't like it when I was a kid.

✓ I didn't eat chocolate because I didn't like it when I was a kid.

The original sentence is fragmented and mixes tenses incorrectly. The corrected sentence uses past tense consistently and combines the fragments into a complete sentence.

× Because some people like that. Test this with that. Uhm, the Lisses for there. But. Yes, some people is not like it, like me too.

✓ Because some people like it. But some people do not like it, like me too.

The original sentence contains unclear phrases and incorrect pronoun usage ('that' instead of 'it'). The correction clarifies the meaning and uses appropriate pronouns and verb forms.

× I don't really know the level of chocolate, but I think will be origonal.

✓ I don't really know the types of chocolate, but I think it will be original.

The original sentence uses 'level' incorrectly and misses the subject 'it' before 'will be'. Also, 'origonal' is a misspelling of 'original'. The correction addresses these issues.

× I saying chocolate is the greatest gift for others because they can enjoy the can. Love it an yes and people. Most of people like sweet.

✓ I think chocolate is the greatest gift for others because they can enjoy it. Yes, most people like sweets.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain grammatical errors such as incorrect verb form 'saying' instead of 'think', unclear phrases, and missing articles. The correction provides clear, complete sentences with proper grammar.