Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 자신의 의견을 표현하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I love eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and delicious. It also helps me feel better when I am stressed.

提案: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 끊겨서 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 간결하게 빈도와 이유를 명확히 표현하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어가야 합니다.

例: I usually eat chocolate once or twice a week because I love it, and it helps me relieve stress.

提案: 문장이 단편적이고 문법 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 과거 시제를 정확히 사용하고, 문장을 연결하여 경험을 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I have loved chocolate since I was a kid. When I was young, my mom used to make milk chocolate with peanut butter for me.

提案: 의견을 명확하게 표현하지 못하고 문장이 단절되어 있습니다. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장 사이에 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 답변하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and makes people feel happy. Also, it is often seen as a symbol of love and friendship.

提案: 답변이 불명확하고 단어 선택이 부적절합니다. 좋아하는 맛을 명확히 말하고, 그 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: My favourite flavour of chocolate is peanut butter because it tastes sweet and creamy, which I really enjoy.

提案: 문장이 불완전하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 선물로서 초콜릿의 장점을 명확히 말하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it symbolizes love and makes people happy.

× Of course I love the chocolate because it's very it's really sweet and delicious for me when I mistrusted are usually electrically it helps me feel better.

✓ Of course I love chocolate because it's really sweet and delicious for me. When I am stressed, I usually eat it because it helps me feel better.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect verb forms such as 'mistrusted are usually electrically'. The correct present participle form 'am stressed' is needed to express the current state. Also, 'eat it' is necessary to complete the meaning. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It can chocolate.

✓ It can be chocolate.

The phrase 'It can chocolate' is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'be' corrects the sentence structure. Also, 'chocolate' is uncountable here, so no plural form is needed.

× Michael to Chocolate is Samiksha.

✓ Michael's favorite chocolate is Samiksha.

The original sentence is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Assuming the intended meaning is to state a favorite chocolate, the possessive form 'Michael's' and the noun 'favorite chocolate' are used. 'Samiksha' is treated as a proper noun.

× Uh, actually, I actually it at least once or twice a week.

✓ Uh, actually, I eat it at least once or twice a week.

The verb 'eat' is missing in the original sentence. The present simple tense 'eat' is appropriate here to describe habitual action.

× Because I love the chocolate and so when I. Trustee, I ate it.

✓ Because I love chocolate, so when I am stressed, I eat it.

The word 'Trustee' is incorrect; it should be 'stressed'. Also, the tense should be present simple 'am stressed' and 'eat' to describe habitual action, not past tense 'ate'.

× I told Liz my stress.

✓ I told Liz about my stress.

The verb 'told' requires an object and a preposition 'about' to indicate the topic. 'My stress' is correct as a singular noun.

× Well, I remember I love the chocolate.

✓ Well, I remember I loved chocolate.

When referring to past memories, the past tense 'loved' is appropriate instead of present tense 'love'.

× Since the I was a kid.

✓ Since I was a kid.

The article 'the' is unnecessary and incorrect before 'I was a kid'. Removing 'the' corrects the sentence.

× When I was. A young my mom may do some chocolates.

✓ When I was young, my mom used to make some chocolates.

The sentence is fragmented and contains errors. 'A young' is incorrect; it should be 'young'. 'May do' is incorrect for past habitual action; 'used to make' is appropriate.

× She made it.

✓ She made them.

'Chocolates' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× She automated milk chocolate with peanut butter.

✓ She made milk chocolate with peanut butter.

'Automated' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'made' to indicate past action of making chocolate.

× My opinion about stuff like that? Chocolate.

✓ My opinion about stuff like that is chocolate.

The original is a fragment and unclear. Adding 'is' connects the subject and complement properly.

× Attached is the you know.

✓ Chocolate is, you know,

The phrase 'Attached is the you know' is unclear and ungrammatical. Replacing with 'Chocolate is, you know,' makes it a proper clause.

× It's. Sweet little said about ice cream making people feel better.

✓ It's sweet, like ice cream, making people feel better.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words. 'Little said' is incorrect; 'like' is appropriate to compare sweetness to ice cream.

× Another thing is said is a symbol.

✓ Another thing is that it is a symbol.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding 'that it is' completes the clause.

× Well, I might go to Chocolate is Nature plant in Spencer.

✓ Well, my favorite chocolate is Nature's Plant in Spencer.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and nouns. Correcting to express favorite chocolate properly.

× Peanut over Max.

✓ Peanut over milk.

Assuming the intended meaning is 'peanut over milk' flavor; 'Max' is unclear and likely incorrect.

× It tasted sweet. Flyboard. For me.

✓ It tastes sweet and flavorful for me.

The original is fragmented and contains unrelated words. Correcting to a proper sentence describing taste.

× Of course, I think you keep the chocolate is.

✓ Of course, I think chocolate is

'You keep the chocolate is' is ungrammatical and unclear. Removing 'you keep' corrects the sentence.

× A good present it as a gifted. Gifted.

✓ a good present as a gift.

The phrase is repetitive and incorrect. 'Gifted' is misused; 'gift' is the correct noun.

× Because then I think chocolate is a symbol of love installed and then people.

✓ Because I think chocolate is a symbol of love and friendship among people.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words like 'installed'. Correcting to a meaningful sentence.