Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I really like eating chocolate because I have a sweet tooth. I especially enjoy dark chocolate because it tastes more bitter than milk chocolate, which I find delicious.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp tần suất ăn chocolate và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp.

例: I eat chocolate occasionally because I know it has both good and bad effects on health, so I try not to eat it too often.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách đầy đủ và mạch lạc hơn, tránh ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do.

例: When I was a child, my parents usually did not allow me to eat chocolate because it was not good for my health. They only gave me a little chocolate sometimes.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Bạn nên giải thích lý do tại sao chocolate phổ biến với các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and comes in many varieties, such as sweet milk chocolate and bitter dark chocolate, which people enjoy.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai. Hãy giải thích lý do yêu thích hương vị chocolate một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because it tastes bitter and gives me energy after a hard day at work, helping me to relax.

提案: Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc và đầy đủ hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do tại sao chocolate là món quà tốt, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Of course, chocolate is a good gift idea, especially for special occasions like birthdays or other celebrations.

× Honestly, I'm a big fan of chocolate in I'm a sweet tooth. Person SO.

✓ Honestly, I'm a big fan of chocolate and I have a sweet tooth.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'in' and 'Person SO' which are not proper pronouns or conjunctions here. The correct conjunction is 'and' to connect two related ideas, and 'I have a sweet tooth' is the correct pronoun usage to express liking sweets.

× I'm left into chocolate especially I love the dark brown Chuck show wet.

✓ I'm into chocolate, especially I love dark brown chocolate.

The phrase 'I'm left into chocolate' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I'm into chocolate'. Also, 'Chuck show wet' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'chocolate'. The adjective 'dark brown' correctly describes 'chocolate'.

× It's taste like a bitter than milk chocolate.

✓ It tastes more bitter than milk chocolate.

The verb 'taste' should be in third person singular form 'tastes' to agree with 'It'. Also, the comparative form 'more bitter' is needed instead of 'a bitter' to compare two types of chocolate.

× Me, honey.

✓ For me, honey.

The phrase 'Me, honey' is incorrect as a subject or object. The correct phrase is 'For me, honey' to express personal preference.

× As I know she'll let it's good, is both good enough?

✓ As I know, it's good; it's good enough.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning with proper punctuation and structure.

× And as I know, chocolate has a good in bad effect, so I don't really eat chocolate often.

✓ And as I know, chocolate has both good and bad effects, so I don't really eat chocolate often.

The phrase 'a good in bad effect' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'both good and bad effects' to express dual nature.

× To be honest, when I was when I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to eat chocolate usually because.

✓ To be honest, when I was a child, my parents usually didn't allow me to eat chocolate because.

The phrase 'didn't allow me to eat chocolate usually' is awkward. The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the verb phrase for correct word order.

× Ah. It's. Not good for my health an. They just give me. A bit of chocolate when I was.

✓ It's not good for my health, and they just gave me a bit of chocolate when I was young.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. The corrected sentence combines fragments into a complete sentence with proper tense and conjunction.

× Oh, chocolate is renowned. Around the world because the taste is so sweet and has variety in Hester IT.

✓ Oh, chocolate is renowned around the world because the taste is so sweet and it has a variety of flavors.

The phrase 'has variety in Hester IT' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'has a variety of flavors' to express diversity in taste.

× Taste like tasty bitter in. Try that.

✓ It tastes bitter but tasty. Try that.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper verb form and adjectives to express taste.

× I love the dark background chocolate so that's why I love the beater of chocolate.

✓ I love dark chocolate, so that's why I love the bitter taste of chocolate.

The phrase 'dark background chocolate' is incorrect; it should be 'dark chocolate'. 'Beater' is a misspelling of 'bitter'. The corrected sentence uses proper adjectives.

× It gives me some. Energy after the hard working day in relaxing.

✓ It gives me some energy after a hard working day to help me relax.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. The corrected sentence combines ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× Of course of chocolate is a good idea too.

✓ Of course, chocolate is a good idea too.

The phrase 'of chocolate' is incorrect here; it should be simply 'chocolate' as the subject.

× Buy gift for others, especially on the special occasions like birthday parties or.

✓ To buy gifts for others, especially on special occasions like birthday parties or other events.

The phrase 'Buy gift for others' lacks proper infinitive form and plural noun. Also, 'on the special occasions' should be 'on special occasions' without 'the' for general meaning.