Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更自然的句子结构并修正语法错误，避免冗余，增加连接词使回答更流畅。可以把主题句扩展并给出具体例子。具体建议： 1) 将“I can easily remember the others people names”改为“I can easily remember other people's names”。 2) 使用连接词比如“for example”或“so”来连接细节。3) 保持句子不超过5句，避免不必要重复。

例: Yes, I’m quite good at remembering things. For example, I can easily remember other people’s names because I repeat them when I first meet someone. I also make a mental note of important dates so I don’t forget them.

提案: 修正时态和语法错误，提供更清晰的因果说明并使用连词使表达更有条理。增加一条说明如何避免再次发生会更完整。具体建议： 1) 将“I was forgotten”改为“I forgot”。 2) 用because或so连接原因与结果。3) 可补充一句说明你后来如何补救或防止再犯。

例: Yes, I once forgot my mother’s birthday because I was extremely busy with work that day. I felt very guilty, so I apologized and took her out to dinner to make up for it. Since then, I set reminders to avoid repeating the mistake.

提案: 完成未完句子並改進語法與詞序，使內容更具體。使用連接詞連貫主句與例子，並舉具體細節（例如每天的時間或工具）。具體建議： 1) 刪去多餘冠詞或修正大寫（“a to-do list”）。 2) 用because或so引出原因，並補充如“every morning”或“on my phone”等細節。3) 確保句子在5句以內並完整結尾。

例: I need to remember my work plan and study materials because they are my top priorities and help me stay organized. For example, I make a to-do list every morning and keep all my study notes in a folder so I can review them easily.

提案: 修正詞語和語法錯誤，使用更恰當的詞彙並補充具體方法與頻率，使回答更完整。具體建議： 1) 將“A to do list”改為“a to-do list”，將“settle phone reminders”改為“set phone reminders”。 2) 把“important data lines”改為“important deadlines”或“important events”。 3) 補充頻率（例如“daily”或“weekly”）並完整結尾。

例: I usually keep a to-do list and set phone reminders so I don’t miss important deadlines. I also review my notes regularly, usually every evening, to make sure I’m on track.

× I can easily remember the others people names and important days.

✓ I can easily remember other people's names and important days.

该句涉及名词复数与限定词的搭配错误。原句中使用了“the others people names”是不正确的，正确表达应该是“other people's names”或“the names of other people”。建议使用“other”修饰人，再用所有格“people's”表示“...的名字”。同时“names”作为复数保持不变。

× Yes, I was forgotten my mother's birthday because I was extremely busy with my work and that day.

✓ Yes, I forgot my mother's birthday because I was extremely busy with my work that day.

这里属于过去时使用错误。被动结构“was forgotten”不适用于有主语（我）主动忘记的情境，应使用主动过去式“forgot”。另外“and that day”冗余，正确表达为“busy with my work that day”。建议把句子改成主动过去时。

× For example, I keep A to do list and.

✓ For example, I keep a to-do list.

该句有冠词与名词搭配及多余连接词问题。'A to do list'中应为小写'a'且'to-do'通常用连字符；句末的'and.'是不完整的连接词，应删除。建议写成‘I keep a to-do list.’。

× I usually keep A to do list and settle phone reminders so I don't miss important data lines.

✓ I usually keep a to-do list and set phone reminders so I don't miss important deadlines.

句中存在介词/动词选择和词汇错误。'settle phone reminders' 用法不正确，正确动词为 'set'。同时 'important data lines' 不是常用表达，应为 'important deadlines'（重要的截止日期）。另外 'A' 应为小写 'a'，'to-do' 建议加连字符。建议改为‘I usually keep a to-do list and set phone reminders so I don't miss important deadlines.’。

× I also review my notes regularly to make sure.

✓ I also review my notes regularly to make sure I don't forget important information.

原句不完整，缺少宾语或从句，导致句子结构不完整（句子缺乏明确的目的或结果）。应补充完整目的从句，例如 'to make sure I don't forget important information.' 以表达复习笔记的目的。