Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer direct, grammatically correct and provide one clear supporting detail. Avoid vague phrases like "good experience of past" and fix tense/grammar. Use a linking phrase to add a reason or example.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can remember the key points from lectures by reviewing my notes each evening, which helps me feel more confident during presentations.

提案: Answer directly with one clear incident and concise reason. Correct grammar and avoid redundant statements about not liking phones. Use linking words to connect the incident and consequence.

例: Yes, I have. Once I left my mobile phone at home before going to an important meeting, so I missed an urgent call. Since then, I try to put my phone by the door to avoid forgetting it.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence about what you must remember. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. "daily step goal"), correct grammar, and a linking word to explain how you track it. Keep it to two or three sentences.

例: I need to remember my daily step goal because I'm health-conscious. Therefore, I check my fitness app every evening and try to walk more if I haven't reached my target.

提案: Give a concise method with clear sequencing and correct grammar. Mention one or two specific strategies (e.g. repetition, notes, alarms) and use linking words like "also" or "for example" to make the answer coherent.

例: I usually remember important things by repeating them to myself and writing short notes in my phone. I also set alarms or calendar reminders so I don't forget deadlines.

× Yes definitely I'm good at memorizing things as it gave me the good experience of past and also help me to more confidence.

✓ Yes, definitely. I'm good at memorizing things because it gave me good experience in the past and also helped me to be more confident.

Multiple issues: wrong adverb placement and verb forms. 'Definitely' needs comma; 'as' is better replaced with 'because' to show reason; 'the good experience of past' is incorrect — use 'good experience in the past'; 'help me to more confidence' is incorrect structure — use 'helped me to be more confident' or 'made me more confident'. Also tense consistency: use past 'gave' and 'helped' for past effects, or present perfect if continuing. Suggestion: keep sentence segments concise and maintain correct collocations ('in the past', 'be more confident').

× Yes, I forgot several times the my mobile phone in my home and I'm not very much like to use mobile phone and mostly I'm using my mobile phone for communication and test for or texting with my friends and family.

✓ Yes, I forgot my mobile phone at home several times. I'm not very fond of using my phone, and I mostly use it for communication and texting with my friends and family.

Errors include word order, extra article 'the my', incorrect preposition 'in my home' should be 'at home', awkward adverb phrase 'not very much like to use' — correct is 'not very fond of using' or 'don't like to use'. Verb forms: 'I'm using' changed to simple present 'I mostly use' for habitual actions. Also removed 'test for or' which is incoherent. Suggestion: place time expressions appropriately ('several times' after main clause), use correct prepositions, and use natural verbs for preferences ('fond of', 'like', 'use').

× Well I'm very health conscious person so daily I need to remember about my The Walking steps that I had done and so daily I am remembered that about and after that I do the steps more than before.

✓ Well, I'm a very health-conscious person, so daily I need to remember the number of walking steps I have taken, and I check that every day so I can walk more than before.

Issues: missing article before 'very health conscious person' — should be 'a'; 'health-conscious' needs hyphenation as a compound adjective; 'remember about my The Walking steps that I had done' is ungrammatical — use 'remember the number of walking steps I have taken'. Tense consistency: 'had done' (past perfect) is unnecessary; use present perfect 'have taken' for actions affecting the present. 'I am remembered that about' is passive and wrong — use 'I check that every day'. Suggestion: use clear nouns ('number of steps'), correct articles, and consistent tenses for habitual/current behaviors (present/simple or present perfect where appropriate).

× Wow, I mostly remember the significant things by memorizing and repeating again and again and also noted on my phone and it also get and I'm also set a reminder in my phone to remember that give remember in me.

✓ I mostly remember important things by memorizing and repeating them, and I also note them on my phone. I set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

Several verb form issues: 'noted on my phone' should be 'note them on my phone' (simple present for habits); 'it also get' is ungrammatical and unclear — removed; 'I'm also set a reminder' mixes passive and present tense incorrectly — use active 'I set reminders'. Use pronoun 'them' to refer to 'important things'. Repetition 'again and again' can be simplified. Suggestion: use consistent verb forms for habits (simple present), use gerunds correctly ('memorizing' used OK but follow with object), and avoid incorrect passive structures.