Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用简洁自然的句子直接回答问题，注意语法和句子连贯性。避免重复表达（如“memorize remember”），修正语法错误（如“I'm struggle”应为“I struggle”），并使用连接词或举例丰富细节。可以把信息分成主题句 + 1-2 个支持细节，控制在最多五句话内。

例: Not really. I often forget small things like where I put my keys or my phone. I also find it difficult to remember people's names and faces, so I write quick notes in a notebook to help me. Using this habit has reduced how often I lose things.

提案: 回答直接且情感真实，但需注意时态一致和细节丰富。可用连接词（for example, so）简单说明后果和补救措施，加入具体细节（如何补偿）让回答更具体和有说服力。保持句子简短明了。

例: Yes, definitely. For example, I once forgot my best friend's birthday and felt really upset about it. I apologized the same day and bought her a thoughtful gift and took her out for dinner to make it up to her.

提案: 结构清晰但句子稍显冗长，注意删除多余词语（如“because… so”二重因果）。可先给主题句，再用连接词列出具体例子，增加具体性（如科目、频率或工具）。保持自然用词。

例: As a student, I need to remember study-related tasks such as deadlines, group meetings and assignment schedules. I also check my emails and messages every morning so I don't miss any important notifications.

提案: 回答具体且实用，但可更简练并使用连接词使逻辑更顺畅。注意冠词和名词单复数（a notebook, a planner），并可补充效果或习惯细节（例如检查频率）。控制在三到四句内。

例: I write important tasks in a notebook or a planner and stick sticky notes on my desk or the fridge so I see them often. I also review my planner every morning, which helps me remember deadlines and meetings.

× I usually forget where I put my keys and my phone and I'm struggle to remember someone's names and face.

✓ I usually forget where I put my keys and my phone and I struggle to remember someone's name and face.

句子中使用了"I'm struggle"，這是不正確的動詞形式。"struggle"為普通動詞，與主語"I"連用時不應加"am"，正確為"I struggle"。此外"someone's names"應為單數"name"，因為指的是一個人的名字。建議：主語+動詞要保持一致，勿把一般現在時態動詞和進行時助動詞混用。

× I usually to use the notebooks to help me memorize remember these things.

✓ I usually use notebooks to help me remember these things.

原句有多重錯誤：使用了不需要的不定式標記"to"（I usually to use 不正確），並且重複了"memorize remember"兩個同義動詞。正確表達為"I usually use notebooks to help me remember these things." 建議：常用動詞前不加不定式標記，避免重覆同義詞，並用不定式"to help me remember"表目的。

× Yes, definitely. I once forgot my best friend's birthday and I feel really upset about it.

✓ Yes, definitely. I once forgot my best friend's birthday and I felt really upset about it.

句子描述過去發生的事件（I once forgot），因此後半句也應使用過去時（felt）而非現在時（feel）。時態需保持一致。建議：描述已發生事件時，整句使用過去時或根據語境調整時態一致。

× And then I apologized and promised to make it up to her.

✓ Then I apologized and promised to make it up to her.

此句語法本身基本正確，但口語中不宜以連接詞"And"開頭書寫範例句；改為"Then"更簡潔自然。建議：書面或正式回答時避免以"And"開頭，使用"Then"或省略連接詞。

× Well, because I am a student now, so I need to remember some important things about study tasks in my daily life, for example the meeting and deadlines, and I also need to check my emails and messages to make sure.

✓ Well, because I am a student now, I need to remember some important study tasks in my daily life, for example meetings and deadlines, and I also need to check my emails and messages to make sure I don't miss anything important.

原句中同時使用了"because"和"so"造成冗餘（重複因果連詞），此外"the meeting"應為複數"meetings"或不定冠詞，"study tasks"語序也可簡化。最後缺少完整的結尾從句，需加上"I don't miss anything important"以完成意思。建議：避免同時使用兩個表示因果的連詞，名詞與冠詞要與語境一致（單複數），並確保句子結構完整。

× I usually write my important things on my notebook, our planner and I also use sticky notes and put them on my desk or my fridge so I can see them very easily.

✓ I usually write down important things in my notebook or planner, and I also use sticky notes, putting them on my desk or my fridge so I can see them easily.

原句中介詞和冠詞使用不當：應使用"write down"表記錄，寫在筆記本中用介詞"in"而非"on"，且"our planner"在此處不確定關係可改為"my planner"或僅用"planner"。此外"put them on my desk or my fridge"可改為動名詞短語"putting them..."使句子更流暢。建議：注意常見搭配（write down, in a notebook），冠詞與所有格應與說話者一致，並用平行結構使句子通順。