Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で内容も分かりやすいですが、いくつかの改善点があります。①語彙と文法の正確さ：”memorized the pages of the textbooks in one night”は意味は通じますが不自然なので”memorized whole chapters in one night”などにすると自然です。②一文が長めで冗長な箇所があるので、トピック文＋補足の2〜3文に分けて簡潔に述べると良いです。③リンク表現を加えると論理が明確になります（For example, / Nowadays, / To do this,）。

例: Yes, I am. In high school I often memorized whole chapters in one night for exams. Now, I usually remember things by repeating them aloud, which helps me retain information more effectively.

提案: 内容は経験に基づいており適切ですが、①具体性が不足しています。どんな会議だったのか、どのような影響があったのか一言で示すと説得力が増します。②語法ミスと語彙選択：”light my schedule in my calendars”は不自然です。正しくは”record/enter/remind my schedule in my calendar”など。③文の構造を整え、接続詞（After that / Since then）を正確に使うこと。

例: Yes, I have. In high school I once missed an important job interview with a company, which made me feel really upset. Since then, I always enter appointments in my calendar and set multiple reminders so I don’t miss them.

提案: 回答は明確ですが、①文法の小さなミス（冠詞や動詞形）を直すべきです。例：”write schedule” → “write my schedule”／”make A to do list” → “make a to-do list”。②具体的な例や頻度（e.g., daily routines, deadlines）を加えると内容が豊かになります。③接続表現（For example, / Also,）を使って流れを自然に。

例: I need to remember daily tasks and appointments. I use Google Calendar to record my schedule and also make a to-do list every morning to prioritise my tasks for the day.

提案: 答えの意図は伝わりますが、表現が不自然で意味が曖昧です。①”saying laundry in my mind”は不明瞭なので具体的に何を心の中で繰り返すのかを書き換える（e.g., repeating key points silently）。②文法と語順：”making A to do list about them”→”making a to-do list”／”importance schedule”→”important appointments”など正しい語を用いること。③理由と結果を明確にするために接続語（Therefore, / As a result,）を使う。

例: I usually repeat important tasks silently to myself and write them on a to-do list. As a result, I rarely forget important appointments or deadlines.

× Yes, I am. When I was in high school I often memorized the pages of the textbooks in one night for the exams, and now I'm also good at memorizing some things by pronouncing.

✓ Yes, I am. When I was in high school I often memorized pages of textbooks in one night for exams, and now I'm also good at memorizing some things by saying them aloud.

過去の習慣について述べる場合、'memorized pages of textbooks' のように冠詞を省略して一般化すると自然です。'the pages of the textbooks' は不必要に限定的なので 'pages of textbooks' としました。また 'in one night for the exams' は 'in one night for exams' の方が自然です。最後に 'by pronouncing' は不自然な動詞の選択であり、話すという意味なら 'saying them aloud' を使うべきです。 Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles for general statements, use natural collocations ('say aloud' instead of 'pronounce') and keep tense consistent with past habit then present ability.

× Yes I have. When I was in high school I missed the important meeting with company and I felt upset about it.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was in high school I missed an important meeting with a company and I felt upset about it.

'the important meeting' は特定の会議を指す場合以外は不自然なので 'an important meeting' とします。また 'with company' は単数可算名詞なので冠詞が必要で 'a company' にします。過去の出来事を述べているので過去形は正しい。 Suggestions: use appropriate articles ('a'/'an'/'the') with countable nouns and ensure noun phrases are complete.

× Since then, I usually light my schedule in my calendars in order to avoid forgetting them.

✓ Since then, I usually mark my schedule in my calendar in order to avoid forgetting things.

'light my schedule' は不自然で意味が通じないため 'mark my schedule' や 'add items to my calendar' に置き換えます。'calendars' は通常単数で 'my calendar' とし、'forgetting them' の 'them' が曖昧なので一般的な表現 'forgetting things' にしました。'Since then' と現在の習慣を表す 'usually' の組合せは許容されます。 Suggestions: use correct verbs for actions ('mark/add' not 'light'), keep noun number consistent and use clear pronouns.

× I think it's important to write schedule in my calendar in daily life.

✓ I think it's important to write a schedule in my calendar in daily life.

可算名詞 'schedule' を単独で使うときは冠詞が必要です。ここでは一般的な一つの予定表を指すため 'a schedule' を使います。また 'in daily life' は自然ですが 'in my daily life' の方がより明確です。 Suggestions: add appropriate articles for countable nouns and consider 'in my daily life' for clarity.

× I decide to write my schedule in my Google Calendar and make A to do list.

✓ I decide to write my schedule in my Google Calendar and make a to-do list.

'A to do list' は形式とハイフン付けが必要で、また冠詞は小文字の 'a' を使います。'to-do' は形容詞的にハイフンでつなぐのが一般的です。 Suggestions: use 'a to-do list' and proper hyphenation for compound nouns.

× I remember important things by saying laundry in my mind or making A to do list about them.

✓ I remember important things by saying them in my mind or making a to-do list about them.

'saying laundry' は意味が不明瞭で恐らく 'saying them'（それらを心の中で言う）を意図しているため 'saying them in my mind' に修正しました。'A to do list' は先と同様に 'a to-do list' にします。 Suggestions: ensure the pronoun refers clearly to the intended noun ('them'), and use correct form 'a to-do list'.

× Thanks to this routine, I never forget the importance schedule.

✓ Thanks to this routine, I never forget important schedules.

'the importance schedule' は文法的に誤りで、'importance'（名詞）を形容詞として使えないため 'important schedules' に変えました。もし単数で特定の予定を言いたければ 'the important schedule' または 'an important schedule' を使います。 Suggestions: use adjectives ('important') to modify nouns, or restructure to 'the important schedule' if referring to a specific one.