Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响了表达的清晰度。建议练习简单句的正确使用，避免重复和错误的词汇使用。

例: To be honest, I am not good at memorising things because I find it difficult to remember information clearly.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用简单明了的句子，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often forget important words because I have many tasks every day, so I can't remember everything.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不准确，句子结构重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，并且避免重复表达。

例: Nowadays, I need to remember to complete my English tasks, such as reading, writing, and reviewing, every day because they are very important for me.

提案: 回答表达较为简单且有语法错误，建议使用更连贯的句子，并且具体说明记忆方法。

例: I usually write important things down and tell my mother, who helps remind me so I can complete tasks on time. This method is very useful for me.

× To be honest I am not good at memory things because I found one I go go up I don't memory things better and it is very and it is very difficult for me to remember things and I often found I didn't memory.

✓ To be honest, I am not good at memorising things because I found that when I grow up, I don't memorise things better and it is very difficult for me to remember things and I often find I don't remember.

动词后面需要用动名词形式，'memory'是名词，正确用法是动词'memorise'的动名词形式'memorising'。此外，句中多处动词形式错误，需改为正确的动词形式。

× To be honest I am not good at memory things because I found one I go go up I don't memory things better and it is very and it is very difficult for me to remember things and I often found I didn't memory.

✓ To be honest, I am not good at memorising things because I found that when I grow up, I don't memorise things better and it is very difficult for me to remember things and I often find I don't remember.

句中'found'和'found'使用正确，但后面出现了'go go up'，应为'grow up'，且时态应保持一致。

× Yes, I often forget things which words which is important and I can't remember it because I every day I have a lot of things to do and I didn't I don't remember everything and.

✓ Yes, I often forget important words and I can't remember them because every day I have a lot of things to do and I don't remember everything.

动词时态应保持一致，'didn't'应改为现在时' don't'，且句子中存在多余词汇，需简化。

× Yes, I often forget things which words which is important and I can't remember it because I every day I have a lot of things to do and I didn't I don't remember everything and.

✓ Yes, I often forget important words and I can't remember them because every day I have a lot of things to do and I don't remember everything.

'things which words which is important'结构不正确，应改为'important words'，且代词'it'应改为复数'them'以对应复数名词。

× Nowadays I need to do every protects, for example English reading, English writing and recall English.

✓ Nowadays I need to do every project, for example English reading, English writing and recalling English.

'protects'应为'projects'，且'recall'作为动词应改为动名词'recalling'以保持结构一致。

× Nowadays I need to do every protects, for example English reading, English writing and recall English.

✓ Nowadays I need to do every project, for example English reading, English writing and recalling English.

动词后面需要用动名词形式，'recall'应改为'recalling'。

× I think I often write it and tell my mother because my mother will help me to do it and tell me the things and I can do it on time.

✓ I think I often write it down and tell my mother because my mother will help me do it and remind me of the things so I can do it on time.

'write it'应为'write it down'表示记下来，'tell me the things'应改为'remind me of the things'更符合表达习惯。

× I think I often write it and tell my mother because my mother will help me to do it and tell me the things and I can do it on time.

✓ I think I often write it down and tell my mother because my mother will help me do it and remind me of the things so I can do it on time.

代词使用不当，'tell me the things'应改为'remind me of the things'，更准确表达意思。