Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples without redundancy.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising because as a student, I often need to remember various study materials. For example, I use repetition techniques to help retain information effectively.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be careful with grammar, such as article usage and verb forms.

例: Yes, during my last exam, I forgot an important question that I had studied before. Although I am usually good at memorising, sometimes I forget crucial details, especially under stress.

提案: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and completing your sentences. Provide specific examples of techniques you use to remember things.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my study materials because it is essential for my success. For example, I revise my notes regularly and use flashcards to help me memorise important information.

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and add linking words to enhance coherence.

例: I usually remember important things by revising them multiple times before exams. Additionally, I write notes and make lists, which help me organise information effectively and recall it easily when needed.

× Yes, in my previous exam test I forgot a important question which I read before the exam and I was forgotten it.

✓ Yes, in my previous exam test I forgot an important question which I read before the exam and I had forgotten it.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound like 'important'. Also, 'was forgotten' is incorrect here; the correct past perfect form is 'had forgotten' to indicate an action completed before another past action.

× Yes, in my previous exam test I forgot a important question which I read before the exam and I was forgotten it.

✓ Yes, in my previous exam test I forgot an important question which I read before the exam and I had forgotten it.

The phrase 'was forgotten' is passive and incorrect here; the student should use the active past perfect 'had forgotten' to show the action happened before the exam.

× I was quite good at memorizing but sometimes I forget thing important things that I have to memorize I usually.

✓ I was quite good at memorizing but sometimes I forget important things that I usually have to memorize.

The phrase 'forget thing important things' is incorrect; 'thing' is singular and redundant. It should be 'forget important things'. Also, the word order is corrected for clarity.

× Honestly, I am good at memorising because uh, as I am a student and I have to memorise various studies on my mind.

✓ Honestly, I am good at memorising because, as I am a student, I have to memorise various studies in my mind.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to something stored mentally.

× I think I need to remember my studies in my daily life because memorizing study is a crucial part of our life as a student so I for example, I. I use various techniques like revising my question.

✓ I think I need to remember my studies in my daily life because memorizing study is a crucial part of our life as students. For example, I use various techniques like revising my questions.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected by splitting into two sentences and fixing plural forms and article usage for clarity.

× I think I need to remember my studies in my daily life because memorizing study is a crucial part of our life as a student so I for example, I. I use various techniques like revising my question.

✓ I think I need to remember my studies in my daily life because memorizing study is a crucial part of our life as students. For example, I use various techniques like revising my questions.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'our life'. Also, 'question' should be plural 'questions' to match the context.