Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“membrane”应为“memorising”，动词时态也不正确。建议注意动词时态的一致性，并避免拼写错误，使表达更自然流畅。

例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or my phone.

提案: 回答重复了前一个问题的内容，缺乏新信息。建议提供不同的例子或详细说明忘记的重要事情，以丰富内容。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as missing a meeting because I didn't write it down in my calendar.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以通过添加更多细节和连接词使表达更完整和连贯。

例: I need to remember the deadlines of my projects and assessments because missing them could affect my grades.

提案: 回答中出现了不恰当的比喻“like a candles”，影响表达的自然性。建议使用更合适的表达，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: I usually set reminders on my phone to keep track of important days and deadlines.

× To be honest, and I'm bad at membrane things, for example, I often forgot where I put my keys or phone.

✓ To be honest, I'm bad at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or phone.

句中使用了过去时态 "forgot"，但描述的是经常发生的习惯动作，应使用一般现在时 "forget"。另外，原句中 "membrane" 是拼写错误，应为 "memorising"。句子结构也不完整，去掉多余的 "and" 更通顺。

× Yes I have. I often forgot where I put my keys or phone.

✓ Yes, I have. I often forget where I put my keys or phone.

这里 "forgot" 是过去时，描述的是经常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时 "forget"。另外，"Yes I have" 后面应加逗号以符合书面表达习惯。

× I usually set a reminder on my phone like a candles to keep track of important days and deadlines.

✓ I usually set a reminder on my phone like a candle to keep track of important days and deadlines.

"candles" 是复数形式，但前面有不定冠词 "a"，应使用单数 "candle"。此外，"like a candle" 这里比喻用法合理，但需保持单数形式一致。