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Part 1

試験官

Are you good at memorising things?

受験者

Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. For example, to memorize English words I only need 3 minutes and I can memories at least 10 words.

試験官

Have you ever forgotten something important?

受験者

Definitely. For example, when I need to get out, I will put something in my room and I will forget where the object is.

試験官

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

受験者

For example, I need to memorize my English words, prepare for my test and I need to review the knowledge I have learned for my test.

試験官

How do you remember important things?

受験者

I will read it and replied it for at least five times and then I will remember it really deeply.

評価

総合

総合: 5.5流暢さと一貫性: 6.0発音: 5.5文法: 5.5語彙: 5.5

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

スコア: 70.0

提案: 回答中存在语法错误,如“memories”应为“memorize”,且表达略显重复和不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时注意动词形式的正确使用。

: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, I can learn at least 10 new English words in just three minutes.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

スコア: 65.0

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确,且表达不够连贯。建议使用过去时描述过去发生的事情,并用连接词使句子更流畅。

: Definitely. For example, once when I was about to go out, I put something in my room and then forgot where I placed it.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

スコア: 70.0

提案: 回答中重复使用“test”,显得冗余。建议合并相关内容,使用连接词使表达更自然。

: In my daily life, I need to memorize English words and review what I have learned to prepare for my tests.

How do you remember important things?

スコア: 60.0

提案: 回答中存在语法错误,“replied”应为“repeat”,且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的动词形式,并简化句子结构。

: I usually read and repeat the information at least five times to remember it well.

文法

Singular and plural issue

× I can memories at least 10 words.

I can memorize at least 10 words.

这里'memories'是名词复数形式,但句中需要动词原形'memorize',因为前面有助动词'can',动词应为原形。

Verb in the present participle form

× I will read it and replied it for at least five times and then I will remember it really deeply.

I will read it and repeat it at least five times and then I will remember it really deeply.

句中'replied'是过去式,前面有连词'and'连接两个动作,且时态为将来时,第二个动词应使用动词原形或现在分词形式。这里用'repeat'更合适,表示重复动作。

重要語彙

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