Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 직접적이지만, 중복되는 표현과 어색한 문장 구조가 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'Memorizing things?'는 불필요하며, 'phones'는 복수형이 어색합니다. 또한, 'in my bank'는 의미가 명확하지 않습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 간결한 문장으로 개선할 필요가 있습니다.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget where I put my phone or credit card. For instance, I sometimes spend a lot of time searching for my credit card at home.

提案: 문법 오류와 불완전한 문장이 있습니다. 'very important thing' 앞에 관사가 빠졌고, 'I I my grades were low'는 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성하고 명확한 이유를 덧붙여야 합니다.

例: Yes, I once forgot to submit an important college assignment, which caused my grades to drop significantly.

提案: 내용이 명확하지만 'medications, necessary medication' 부분이 중복되고 어색합니다. 좀 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 표현할 필요가 있습니다.

例: I need to remember to take my medications and vitamins every day. Also, I try to eat regular meals to maintain my health.

提案: 중복된 단어('With with')와 문법 오류('track date')가 있습니다. 문장을 명확하게 다듬고, 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋겠습니다.

例: I rely on technology by setting alarms and reminders on my phone. For example, I use apps that help me keep track of important dates and tasks.

× I often forget where I placed my phones or credit cards.

✓ I often forget where I placed my phone or credit cards.

'Phones' should be singular 'phone' because typically a person carries one phone. Using plural here is unusual unless the person has multiple phones, which is less common. The correction aligns with common usage.

× sometimes I spend a lot of time looking for my credit cards in my bank.

✓ sometimes I spend a lot of time looking for my credit cards at my bank.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to a location like a bank. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate the place where the searching happens.

× Yes, I have forgotten very important thing.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten a very important thing.

The phrase 'very important thing' is singular and requires an article 'a' before it. Omitting the article causes the sentence to be grammatically incorrect.

× I I my grades were low.

✓ I think my grades were low.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains a repetition 'I I'. Adding 'think' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I need to remember to take my medications, necessary medication and vitamins.

✓ I need to remember to take my medications, necessary medicine, and vitamins.

The word 'medication' is uncountable and should be 'medicine' when referring to it in a general sense. Also, adding commas improves clarity.

× With with apps they help me track date.

✓ With apps, they help me track dates.

The sentence has a repeated word 'with' and 'date' should be plural 'dates' to match the context of tracking multiple dates. Also, a comma after 'apps' improves readability.