Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and correcting sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially when I'm in a rush or distracted. For instance, I sometimes forget to bring my lunch to work because my mind is focused on other tasks, making it hard to recall small details.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to improve coherence and provide more specific details about your feelings or consequences.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, recently I left my wallet at home when I went to the bank to check my debit card, which I didn't have with me. I was really frustrated because it caused a lot of inconvenience.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid repeating words, and complete your sentences. Use linking words to list items smoothly.

例: I need to remember many things daily. For instance, I always make sure to take my car keys, lunch, wallet, and mobile phone before leaving for work. Also, I remind myself to bring my gym bag whenever I go to the gym.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has some grammatical errors. Try to finish your sentences fully and use clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to structure your answer logically and provide specific examples.

例: I use different methods to remember important things. First, I make short notes on my phone and write reminders on small papers that I keep in front of me. Second, I set alarms on my phone to alert me when I need to complete specific tasks on time.

× I wouldn't say I'm very good in recalling things

✓ I wouldn't say I'm very good at recalling things

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. We say 'good at' when referring to skills or abilities.

× when I'm in rush or distracted

✓ when I'm in a rush or distracted

The phrase 'in rush' is incorrect because 'rush' is a countable noun here and requires an article. The correct form is 'in a rush'.

× For example, sometime I forget my sometime I forget to bring my lunch walks to work

✓ For example, sometimes I forget to bring my lunch when I walk to work

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'my lunch walks to work' is incorrect; it should be 'my lunch when I walk to work' to make sense.

× I have been forgotten something before

✓ I have forgotten something before

The phrase 'have been forgotten' is passive and incorrect here. The correct present perfect form is 'have forgotten'.

× Recently I left my wallet at home when I went to bank and tried to check my debit card which was not with me

✓ Recently I left my wallet at home when I went to the bank and tried to check my debit card which was not with me

The phrase 'went to bank' requires the definite article 'the' before 'bank'. Also, the sentence is in past tense and is correct otherwise.

× I really frustrated on myself because it give me a lot of inconvenience

✓ I was really frustrated with myself because it gave me a lot of inconvenience

The verb 'frustrated' needs an auxiliary verb 'was' to form past tense. The preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'frustrated with' is correct. Also, 'give' should be 'gave' to match past tense.

× I always make sure to to take car keys, my lunch, walks, and mobile phone before leaving to work

✓ I always make sure to take my car keys, my lunch, wallet, and mobile phone before leaving for work

The phrase 'leaving to work' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'leaving for work'. Also, 'walks' seems out of place; likely 'wallet' was intended.

× And I also should make, uh, should remind that I have my gym bag whenever I go to gym

✓ And I should also remind myself to bring my gym bag whenever I go to the gym

The phrase 'should remind that I have' is incorrect; it should be 'remind myself to bring'. Also, 'go to gym' requires the definite article 'the'.

× These are.

✓ These are the things I always remember.

The sentence 'These are.' is incomplete and lacks an object or complement to clarify what 'these' refers to.

× I make short notes in my phone and also write down on small papers and put it all I always keep in front of me

✓ I make short notes on my phone and also write them down on small pieces of paper and keep them all in front of me

The correct preposition with 'notes' and 'phone' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'write down on small papers' should be 'write them down on small pieces of paper'. The phrase 'put it all I always keep' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'keep them all'.

× I set alarm system in my phone whenever I have to work any specific work on time

✓ I set an alarm on my phone whenever I have to do any specific work on time

The phrase 'set alarm system in my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'set an alarm on my phone'. Also, 'have to work any specific work' is awkward; 'have to do any specific work' is better.