Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，然後用一兩句話清楚說明原因，避免重複和語法錯誤。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising because as a nurse, I need to remember many important details during my work.

提案: 回答中有些語法錯誤和用詞不當，建議使用更自然的表達方式，並注意拼寫和語法正確。

例: Yes, I once forgot to bring my nurse shoes, which made me feel awkward and uncomfortable because we must wear special shoes in the unit.

提案: 回答不夠流暢且有語法錯誤。建議簡潔明確地表達你的記憶方法，並使用正確的時態和句型。

例: Before I go out, I always remind myself to take my keys, phone, and wallet to avoid forgetting anything.

提案: 回答中有重複和語法錯誤，建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢，並避免重複詞語。

例: I usually read important information three times, write it down or type it on my phone, and set an alarm to remind me.

× Yes, I'd like to say I'm good at memorizing because I am nurse and I think being a nurse you have to have the good memo memory ability and because you have a lot of things to do in your clinic time.

✓ Yes, I'd like to say I'm good at memorizing because I am a nurse and I think being a nurse you have to have good memory ability because you have a lot of things to do during your clinic time.

The phrase 'I am nurse' is missing the article 'a' before 'nurse', which is necessary for singular countable nouns. Also, 'the good memo memory ability' is awkward; 'good memory ability' is more natural. 'In your clinic time' should be 'during your clinic time' for correct preposition use.

× Yes, definitely. I remember the one time I just forgot to bring my my nurse shoes and I just felt awkward and unconvenient because we have to wear large shoes when you are walking in the unit.

✓ Yes, definitely. I remember one time I forgot to bring my nurse shoes and I felt awkward and inconvenient because we have to wear large shoes when walking in the unit.

The phrase 'the one time' should be 'one time' for natural expression. 'Unconvenient' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'inconvenient'. Also, 'when you are walking' can be simplified to 'when walking' for smoother flow.

× I have a tip to myself as I I will just tell myself before I went out I will say umm the key, phone and my wallet because I it can help me to remind everything.

✓ I have a tip for myself: before I go out, I tell myself to take the key, phone, and my wallet because it helps me remember everything.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly: 'before I went out' (past) conflicts with 'I will just tell myself' (future). Consistency requires present tense 'before I go out' and 'I tell myself'. Also, 'help me to remind everything' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember everything'. 'Tip to myself' should be 'tip for myself'.

× Typically I will read three times in my in my mind and even I will try to write down or just type in my phone and and maybe set a clock and to remind me to do something.

✓ Typically, I will read something three times in my mind, and I also try to write it down or type it into my phone, and maybe set a clock to remind me to do something.

The phrase 'set a clock and to remind me' is incorrect; it should be 'set a clock to remind me'. Also, 'read three times in my in my mind' is awkward; adding 'something' clarifies the object. Repetition of 'and' is unnecessary. 'Type in my phone' should be 'type it into my phone'.