Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在一些语法错误和用词不当，例如“beverage”应为“average”，“traffic”应为“tricks”，“datas”应为“data”，“follow”应为“forget”。建议你注意单词的正确拼写和用法，同时简洁明了地表达观点。

例: To be honest, I think I'm average at memorising things. I can remember information better if I'm really interested or if I use some tricks like making associations. However, I often forget boring things like numbers or data.

提案: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“forget”应为“forgot”，“slapped in my mind”表达不准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态一致。

例: Yes, definitely. One time I forgot my best friend Reina's birthday. I felt really bad because I was very busy with school and it slipped my mind. Luckily, I made it up to her by taking her out for dinner.

提案: 你的回答内容较为完整，但最后一句不完整，建议完整表达想法。同时，可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，例如“and”连接事项。

例: Well, I need to remember my class schedule, deadlines, and small things like what to buy from the store. I also try to remember people's birthdays and appointments. Since it's not easy sometimes, I usually write things down or set reminders.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“cleaners”应为“calendars”，且表达不够流畅。建议注意词汇准确性，避免口头语“uh”，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually rely on digital tools like my phone's calendar or reminder apps for really important things. I also write notes and put them where I can see them. Sometimes, I use visual memory techniques or repeat information to help me remember.

× I think I'm just a beverage at it.

✓ I think I'm just average at it.

这里使用了错误的词汇“beverage”（饮料），应使用形容词“average”（一般的）来表达能力一般。

× But when it come to boring stuff like numbers or datas I often follow.

✓ But when it comes to boring stuff like numbers or data, I often forget.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，动词应加-s变成“comes”。“datas”是不可数名词，正确形式是“data”。“follow”用错，应为“forget”（忘记）。

× One time I forget my best friend Reina's birthday.

✓ One time I forgot my best friend Reina's birthday.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式“forgot”而非现在式“forget”。

× I made it up to her by taking her out of for dinner.

✓ I made it up to her by taking her out for dinner.

介词“of”在此处多余，应去掉，正确表达是“taking her out for dinner”。

× I also try to remember people's birthday and appointment.

✓ I also try to remember people's birthdays and appointments.

“birthday”和“appointment”应使用复数形式，因为指多个生日和多个约会。

× It's not easy sometimes so I usually write things down or.

✓ It's not easy sometimes, so I usually write things down.

句子末尾“or”后无内容，导致句子结构不完整，应去掉“or”。

× I usually rely on the digital tools like my phones, uh, cleaners or reminder apps for really important stuff.

✓ I usually rely on digital tools like my phone, calendar, or reminder apps for really important stuff.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，且“cleaners”用词不当，应为“calendar”（日历）等相关词。

× Sometimes I use visual memories or even repeat.

✓ Sometimes I use visual memory or even repetition.

“visual memories”应为不可数名词“visual memory”，且“repeat”作为动词不完整，改为名词“repetition”更合适。