Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“the status”应为“statutes”，且“don't spend much of the time”表达不够地道。建议简化句子结构，注意语法准确性，并使用更恰当的词汇。

例: Yes, I think I am good at memorising things because I study law at university. There are many laws and rules I need to remember, but I find it easy and don't need to spend too much time preparing for exams.

提案: 回答内容具体且符合题意，但表达略显重复，如“reminded myself to bring the ID card”与“left my ID card at home”之间缺少衔接词。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意时态一致。

例: Once, when I was packing for a trip, I reminded myself to bring my ID card. However, when I arrived at the hotel to check in, I realized I had left it at home.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够简洁，且“brain tissues”应为“facial tissues”或“tissues”。建议避免口语填充词，简化句子结构，并使用准确词汇。

例: I need to remember to bring my books and notes to school, such as criminal law and economic law books, because I have these classes on the same day. Also, I always remind myself to bring tissues.

提案: 回答表达清晰，但有语法错误，如“write down them”应为“write them down”，“teach my mom”用词不当，应为“ask my mom”。建议注意固定搭配和词汇准确性。

例: I write important things down in the notes app on my phone so I can check them anytime. Also, I sometimes ask my mom to remind me, so I can double-check before leaving my apartment.

× there are always many ordinances or the status that have to be recited

✓ there are always many ordinances or statutes that have to be recited

这里的'status'应为复数形式'statutes'，因为前面用了'many'，表示多个，且与'ordinances'并列，需保持复数一致。

× I don't spend much of the time preparing for the final exams

✓ I don't spend much time preparing for the final exams

'much of the time'通常用于特指某段时间，这里表达的是一般意义的时间量，应该用'much time'，去掉'of the'更自然。

× Once when I prepared for the luggage for my trip, I reminded myself to bring the ID card with me

✓ Once when I was preparing the luggage for my trip, I reminded myself to bring the ID card with me

这里描述过去某一段时间正在进行的动作，应该用过去进行时'was preparing'，而不是一般过去时'prepared'。

× I found that I still left my ID card at home

✓ I found that I had still left my ID card at home

这里表示过去某时发现之前已经发生的动作，应该用过去完成时'had left'，表示先于过去的动作。

× I have to remember the books and notes to bring to school so that I can take notes and during class

✓ I have to remember the books and notes to bring to school so that I can take notes during class

'and during class'前多余的'and'连接词应去掉，且'notes'前的'and'应连接前后内容，调整语序使句子通顺。

× I have to bring criminal law books or the economic law books because I have these classes in one day

✓ I have to bring criminal law books or economic law books because I have these classes in one day

'the economic law books'中的定冠词'the'不必要，且与前面的'criminal law books'保持一致，去掉'the'更自然。

× I write down them in the memorandum in my phone so that I can check anytime and anywhere without forgetting them

✓ I write them down in the memorandum on my phone so that I can check anytime and anywhere without forgetting them

'write down'是动词短语，'them'应放在'write'和'down'之间；'in the memorandum in my phone'应改为'on my phone'，因为手机上的应用通常用'on'。