Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I always make a list of what I need to do. It help me reminds important tasks when I tend to forget about them.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
As far as I remember, I have never forgotten something important because I always use reminder apps to help me remember important tasks when I when I'm about to forget them, so I always remember important tasks.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Since I'm a high school student, I need to remember some deadline of my assignments in school. Sometimes it is hard for me to remember all of them, so I usually use reminder apps on my computer, which helps me avoid forgetting about them.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I always use a reminder up or write down a list of tasks. This method helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting about important tasks and also they helps me. They help me.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 70.0提案: 文法の誤り（"help me reminds"は"helps me remember"が正しい）を修正し、より自然で効果的な表現にしましょう。また、回答は5文以内に収め、冗長さを避けることが重要です。
例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I always make a list of tasks. This helps me remember important things when I tend to forget them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答が冗長で繰り返しが多いです。文を簡潔にし、論理的なつながりを持たせるために接続詞を使いましょう。
例: As far as I remember, I have never forgotten anything important because I use reminder apps that alert me before I forget tasks.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 80.0提案: 内容は具体的で良いですが、"some deadline"は不自然なので"the deadlines"に直しましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をより流暢にすると良いです。
例: Since I'm a high school student, I need to remember the deadlines of my assignments. Sometimes it's hard to keep track of all of them, so I use reminder apps on my computer to avoid forgetting.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 60.0提案: "reminder up"は誤りで"reminder app"が正しいです。また、最後の部分は繰り返しが多く、文法的にも誤りがあります。簡潔で正確な表現にしましょう。
例: I always use a reminder app or write a list of tasks. These methods help me stay organized and avoid forgetting important things.
文法
× It help me reminds important tasks when I tend to forget about them.
✓ It helps me remember important tasks when I tend to forget about them.
The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular). Also, 'reminds' is incorrect here because 'help' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 's'. Therefore, 'help me remember' is correct.
× I need to remember some deadline of my assignments in school.
✓ I need to remember some deadlines for my assignments in school.
The word 'deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' because it refers to multiple assignments. Also, the correct preposition to use with 'deadline' is 'for' rather than 'of'.
× I always use a reminder up or write down a list of tasks.
✓ I always use a reminder app or write down a list of tasks.
The word 'reminder up' is a typo; it should be 'reminder app'. This correction is necessary for clarity and correctness.
× This method helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting about important tasks and also they helps me.
✓ This method helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting about important tasks, and it also helps me.
The phrase 'they helps me' is incorrect because 'they' is plural and 'helps' is singular. It should be 'it also helps me' referring back to 'this method' which is singular.
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