Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够流畅且有语法错误，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。可以用简单句表达观点，并举例说明。

例: To be honest, I am not very good at memorizing things, except for funny or interesting events involving my friends, which I remember clearly even after a long time.

提案: 回答含糊且语法混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答问题，并举一个具体的例子来说明。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, last month I forgot to submit an assignment on time, which caused me some trouble.

提案: 回答内容较为杂乱，语句不连贯。建议使用连词使表达更流畅，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule, appointments, places I need to go, and what meals to prepare. There are many things to keep track of, so it can be quite challenging.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议简洁明了地说明使用电子设备帮助记忆，并举例说明。

例: I usually use electronic devices like my phone to set reminders and keep my timetable, which helps me remember important tasks and appointments.

× I am not good at memorizing things except of some interesting funny things such as what my friend did in and make me laugh and make everyone laugh.

✓ I am not good at memorizing things except some interesting funny things such as what my friend did that make me laugh and make everyone laugh.

介词“except”后不需要加“of”，正确用法是“except some”。

× I can memori write these things very uh clearly, although the time pass.

✓ I can memorize and write these things very clearly, although time passes.

动词时态错误，“pass”应使用第三人称单数形式“passes”，因为主语是“time”。另外，“memori write”应改为“memorize and write”。

× just this time I this moment I forget that I have the my experience that I have forgotten something important.

✓ Just now, at this moment, I forget that I have the experience that I have forgotten something important.

句子结构混乱，时态使用不当。应使用“Just now, at this moment”来表达时间点，且“forget”在此处可保留现在时表示当前状态。

× I remember that I have forgotten something important in the past, but now I cannot remember.

✓ I remember that I forgot something important in the past, but now I cannot remember.

“have forgotten”表示过去完成时，强调动作完成，但此处更合适用一般过去时“forgot”，因为动作发生在过去的某个时间点。

× There is such a quite a a messy things in the my daily life.

✓ There are quite a few messy things in my daily life.

“things”是复数，谓语应使用“are”；“such a quite a a”结构错误，应改为“quite a few”；“the my”重复，去掉“the”。

× There is such a quite a a messy things in the my daily life.

✓ There are quite a few messy things in my daily life.

“things”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× I usually use my timetable to to remember things because I'm not really. I choose my brain so I use tech.

✓ I usually use my timetable to remember things because I don't really rely on my brain, so I use technology.

“choose my brain”表达错误，应为“rely on my brain”；“use tech”应完整表达为“use technology”。

× I will submit my timetable into the schedule.

✓ I will input my timetable into the schedule.

“submit”通常用于提交文件或申请，表达输入时间表应使用“input”或“enter”。