Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. "Manly responsibility" wa machigai de, "main responsibility" to iu beki desu. "Tracking" no tsukaikata mo fumei de, bun no kouzou mo fumei desu. Motto seikaku ni shite, fukusuu no setsumei o tsukau to yoku narimasu.

例: Yes, I think I am good at memorising things because my main responsibility is to track the progress and issues of projects. Therefore, I need to remember many details reported by my team.

提案: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, bunpou no machigai ga arimasu. "Forget to bring my home" wa fumei de, "forget to bring my phone" to iu beki desu. Motto seikaku ni setsumei shi, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukaimashou.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I often forget to bring my phone when I go out, and it bothers me because it is very important.

提案: Kotae ga fumei de, bun no kouzou ga wakari nikui desu. "What what things" wa fumei de, setsumei ga tarinai desu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui kotoba de setsumei shite kudasai.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember work-related tasks because I have to follow up on every detail of the projects. Also, I need to remember personal plans and appointments.

提案: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, "good memorized people" wa machigai desu. "Good at memorizing" to iu hyougen ga tadashii desu. Motto rikai shi yasui you ni bun o seikaku ni shite kudasai.

例: Usually, I write down all the important details I need to remember, especially for work. Even though I am good at memorizing, writing things down is very important.

× my manly responsibility is to tracking, is to track the project

✓ my main responsibility is to track the project

The phrase 'is to tracking' is incorrect because after 'is to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'manly' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'main'. So, the correct phrase is 'my main responsibility is to track the project'.

× the things that reported from

✓ the things that are reported

The phrase 'reported from' is incomplete and incorrect here. The passive voice requires 'are reported' to indicate that the things are being reported. The preposition 'from' is unnecessary and confusing in this context.

× Yes, of course think everyone would forget things in their daily life

✓ Yes, of course I think everyone forgets things in their daily life

The original sentence misses the subject 'I' before 'think'. Also, 'would forget' is less appropriate here; the simple present 'forgets' is better to express a general truth. Modal verb 'would' is not needed.

× I I forget to bring my home when I when I going out

✓ I forget to bring my phone when I go out

The sentence has repeated 'I' and incorrect object 'my home' instead of 'my phone'. Also, 'when I going out' is incorrect; it should be 'when I go out' using the base form after 'I'.

× it is very bother me because it's the important

✓ it bothers me a lot because it's important

'bother' is a verb, so 'very bother me' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it bothers me a lot'. Also, 'the important' is incorrect; 'important' is an adjective and does not need 'the' here.

× Mostly, umm, are the things from the work

✓ Mostly, umm, the things from work

The phrase 'are the things from the work' is incorrect because 'are' is unnecessary here and 'the work' should be just 'work' to refer generally. The sentence should be simplified to 'Mostly, umm, the things from work'.

× because I need to, umm, follow up every detail of the project and and of course in daily life I'd also need to remember the things I need to plan

✓ because I need to, umm, follow up every detail of the project and, of course, in daily life I also need to remember the things I need to plan

The sentence has repeated 'and and' and awkward phrasing. Adding commas around 'of course' improves clarity. Also, 'I'd also need' is better as 'I also need' to keep tense consistent.

× I will write down every details I need to remember

✓ I will write down every detail I need to remember

'Every' is followed by a singular noun, so 'details' should be 'detail'. The correct phrase is 'every detail'.

× even I'm uh, good, umm, good memorized people

✓ even though I'm, uh, a good memorizer

'good memorized people' is incorrect. The speaker is referring to themselves, so singular pronoun 'I' is used. 'Good memorized people' is ungrammatical; 'a good memorizer' is correct.