Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm not very good at memories since”不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用完整且正确的句子，避免语法错误，同时使表达更流畅自然。

例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I often forget the words quickly. Therefore, I have to review and repeat them frequently to remember them better.

提案: 回答不完整且句子断裂，缺少必要的细节和连贯性。建议完整表达事件经过，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Of course, I have forgotten something important before. For example, last semester, I forgot to submit a teamwork homework, which was quite stressful because it affected my grade.

提案: 回答中缺少连贯的句子结构，且动词形式不正确。建议使用完整句子并正确使用动词形式，同时使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to finish my homework, feed my cats, and tidy my room.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“It's can.”不正确。建议使用完整且正确的句子，并使表达更流畅。

例: I write down important things to remember them. I have a notebook where I always write important tasks. It helps remind me to do them.

× Actually, I'm not very good at memories since.

✓ Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things.

这里应使用动名词形式'memorising'，而不是名词'memories'。动名词用来表示动作或习惯，符合句意。

× For example, when I learned new vocabulary, I often forget the words quickly.

✓ For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I often forget the words quickly.

句中描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，'learn'而非过去时'learned'。

× So I have to review and repeat them frequently and to remember them better.

✓ So I have to review and repeat them frequently to remember them better.

句中'and to remember'结构不正确，应去掉'and'使句子结构连贯。

× Of course, I have forgotten something important before.

✓ Of course, I have forgotten something important before.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× For example, last system.

✓ For example, last semester.

'last system'应为'last semester'，且句子不完整，应补充完整表达。

× I forgot to submit a teamwork homework.

✓ I forgot to submit a teamwork assignment.

'homework'不可数，前面加'teamwork'不合适，改为'assignment'更准确。

× Which was quite stressful because it.

✓ It was quite stressful because of that.

原句为不完整句，应改为完整句，且表达更清晰。

× I need to remember finish my homework, Feed my cats. And tidying my room.

✓ I need to remember to finish my homework, feed my cats, and tidy my room.

动词不定式和动词原形应统一，且句子连接应正确，去掉句号改为逗号。

× I will write down to remember important things.

✓ I will write down important things to remember.

'write down'后应直接跟宾语，'to remember'放在句尾作目的状语。

× I have a notebook.

✓ I have a notebook.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I always write the important things on it.

✓ I always write important things in it.

'write on it'通常指写在物体表面，写在笔记本里应用'in it'。

× It's can.

✓ It can.

'It's can'中'It's'为'It is'，与情态动词'can'连用不正确，应去掉'is'。

× Reminds me to do them.

✓ It reminds me to do them.

缺少主语，应加上'It'使句子完整。