Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' which reduce fluency. Try to give a direct and clear response with fewer hesitations. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for naturalness.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I prepare thoroughly before exams and usually get excellent grades.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always make lists and put the most important tasks at the top.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your idea clearly and use correct verb tenses. Also, avoid repeating the same phrase unnecessarily.

例: I often forget small things, like when my mom tells me to take the chicken out of the fridge.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to vary your vocabulary and sentence structure for better fluency.

例: I always make task lists because they help me remember important things and stay organized in my daily life.

× Maybe yes, because when I have exam before this day, I study uh, everything that can be uh in exams and I always have great umm grades in this XM.

✓ Maybe yes, because when I had an exam before this day, I studied uh, everything that could be uh in exams and I always had great umm grades in this exam.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verbs 'have' and 'study' should be in the past tense 'had' and 'studied'. Also, 'can be' should be changed to 'could be' to match the past context. 'XM' seems to be a typo and corrected to 'exam'. Using the correct past tense verbs ensures proper time reference and clarity.

× Maybe yes, because when I have exam before this day, I study uh, everything that can be uh in exams and I always have great umm grades in this XM.

✓ Maybe yes, because when I had an exam before this day, I studied uh, everything that could be uh in exams and I always had great umm grades in this exam.

The noun 'exam' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'an' before it. Omitting the article causes the sentence to sound unnatural and grammatically incorrect.

× No, because I always make some lists and important thing is 1st of this list, so it's not happen never.

✓ No, because I always make some lists and the important thing is the first on this list, so it never happens.

The phrase 'important thing' refers to a specific item, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Also, '1st' should be written as 'first' and 'of this list' should be 'on this list' to be idiomatic. Correct article usage and prepositions improve clarity and correctness.

× No, because I always make some lists and important thing is 1st of this list, so it's not happen never.

✓ No, because I always make some lists and the important thing is the first on this list, so it never happens.

The phrase 'it's not happen never' is incorrect; it should be 'it never happens' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'the first on this list' is the correct prepositional phrase. Proper article and verb form usage are necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× Maybe it was joke but I always forgotten when mom tell me that chicken took out from fridge and I always forget this.

✓ Maybe it was a joke but I always forget when mom tells me that the chicken was taken out from the fridge and I always forget this.

'It was joke' needs the article 'a' before 'joke'. 'Always forgotten' is incorrect; 'always forget' fits better for habitual action. 'Mom tell' should be 'mom tells' for third person singular present tense. 'Chicken took out' should be passive 'chicken was taken out'. 'Fridge' needs the definite article 'the'. These corrections align verb tenses and article usage properly.

× Maybe it was joke but I always forgotten when mom tell me that chicken took out from fridge and I always forget this.

✓ Maybe it was a joke but I always forget when mom tells me that the chicken was taken out from the fridge and I always forget this.

The verb 'tell' must agree with the third person singular subject 'mom', so it should be 'tells'. Subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical correctness.

× Maybe it was joke but I always forgotten when mom tell me that chicken took out from fridge and I always forget this.

✓ Maybe it was a joke but I always forget when mom tells me that the chicken was taken out from the fridge and I always forget this.

The noun 'chicken' here refers to a specific item, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Similarly, 'fridge' needs 'the' as it is a specific place. Proper article usage clarifies meaning.

× I always make task lists and it helps me to never forget something important. It helps me to be more organized person in real life.

✓ I always make task lists and they help me to never forget something important. They help me to be a more organized person in real life.

The subject 'task lists' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps'. Also, 'a more organized person' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Subject-verb agreement and article usage are important for grammatical accuracy.