Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，例如直接回答并举例说明。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember daily details like what I eat and what activities I do.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达忘记了什么以及感受。

例: Yes, last week I forgot an important test because I was distracted by a party invitation from my friend, which made me feel quite upset.

提案: 回答较为简单且有重复，句子结构不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用连词使句子更连贯，并具体说明使用待办事项清单的方式。

例: In daily life, it's important to remember tasks. For example, I usually use a To-Do List to organise my important activities and ensure I don't forget them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，清楚说明记忆方法，并用连词连接句子。

例: I usually use a To-Do List to remember important things. If I forget something, I ask my friends to remind me later, which helps me stay on track.

× Yes, I'm pretty good at memory things.

✓ Yes, I'm pretty good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising'来表达记忆的动作。'memory'是名词，不能直接修饰'things'。建议使用动名词形式。

× Last week my friend invited me go to the party and I forgot the very important test, so I'm quite. Set.

✓ Last week my friend invited me to go to the party and I forgot the very important test, so I'm quite upset.

动词'invite'后面需要加介词'to'，表示邀请去做某事。'quite. Set'中'quite'后面缺少形容词，且'upset'拼写错误。应改为'quite upset'。

× If I can't remember I can tell my friends. My friends can told me later and inspire me.

✓ If I can't remember, I can tell my friends. My friends can tell me later and inspire me.

'can'后面应接动词原形，'told'是过去式，错误。应改为'tell'。另外，两个句子之间应加逗号。