Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“forgot”应为“forget”，以及“go out for a travel”应为“go out for travel”或“go on a trip”。建议注意时态一致性和固定搭配的使用。

例: To be honest, I am not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget to bring my textbook or pencils to class, and sometimes I even forget to close my windows when I go on a trip.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“need to have a exam”应为“needed to take an exam”，以及“Without ID card I can get into the class”应为“Without my ID card, I couldn't get into the class”。建议注意时态和句子结构的准确性。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, one day I needed to take an exam but I forgot my school ID card. Without it, I couldn't enter the classroom, which made me very nervous.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但“memorize the knowledge in the textbook”表达不够自然，建议使用“learn”或“study”。另外，“important days about my friends”应为“important days for my friends”。建议用更地道的表达方式。

例: There are many things I need to remember daily. First, I need to study the knowledge from my textbooks. Second, I have to remember important dates for my friends, family, and boyfriend, such as birthdays and anniversaries.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如“keep a remember”应为“set a reminder”，“When the days come across the phone will notice me”表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的句子。注意句子连贯和语法正确。

例: For important things, I set reminders on my phone. When the day comes, my phone notifies me. Besides that, I also write important notes on paper and stick them to my desk so I rarely forget them.

× I will forgot to bring my textbook or pencils when I go to class

✓ I will forget to bring my textbook or pencils when I go to class

这里使用了将来时态的助动词 'will'，后面应该接动词原形 'forget'，而不是过去式 'forgot'。这是动词过去分词使用错误。

× sometimes I even forget to close my windows when I go out for a travel

✓ sometimes I even forget to close my windows when I go out for a trip

这里 'travel' 是不可数名词，不能用 'a travel'，应改为 'a trip'。同时，'forget' 是正确的动词形式。

× One day I need to have a exam and I forgot my school ID card

✓ One day I needed to have an exam and I forgot my school ID card

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，应该使用过去时态 'needed'，而不是现在时 'need'。

× One day I need to have a exam and I forgot my school ID card

✓ One day I needed to have an exam and I forgot my school ID card

'exam' 以元音音素开头，前面的不定冠词应使用 'an' 而不是 'a'。

× Without ID card I can get into the class

✓ Without my ID card, I couldn't get into the class

这里缺少主语 'my'，并且句子时态和语气不正确，描述过去的情况应使用过去时 'couldn't get'。

× I was very nervous

✓ I was very nervous

该句无语法错误，无需修改。

× There are a lot of things for me to remember in my daily life

✓ There are a lot of things for me to remember in my daily life

该句无语法错误，无需修改。

× I need to remember some important days about my friends, family and boyfriend

✓ I need to remember some important days for my friends, family and boyfriend

这里 'days' 应该用介词 'for' 表示 '对...重要的日子'，而不是 'about'。

× I will just keep a remember on my phone

✓ I will just keep a reminder on my phone

'remember' 是动词，名词形式应为 'reminder'，这里使用错误的词性。

× When the days come across the phone will notice me

✓ When the days come, the phone will notify me

'come across' 用法错误，且 'phone will notice me' 不自然，应改为 'phone will notify me'。

× On top of that I also write important things on a paper and stick it to my desk so I I hardly can forgot them

✓ On top of that, I also write important things on a piece of paper and stick it to my desk so I can hardly forget them

句子结构混乱，'a paper' 应为 'a piece of paper'，'I I' 是重复，'hardly can forgot' 时态错误，应为 'can hardly forget'。