Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tu respuesta es natural pero un poco corta y repetitiva. Para mejorar, intenta dar una respuesta más completa y clara, usando una estructura básica con una oración principal y detalles de apoyo, y evita redundancias. Por ejemplo, explica por qué no eres bueno memorizando y da un ejemplo concreto.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often get distracted easily. For instance, I sometimes forget what I was doing just a few minutes ago, which can be frustrating.

提案: Tu respuesta tiene errores gramaticales y falta claridad. Para mejorar, responde directamente y usa detalles específicos para explicar la situación, usando conectores para que la respuesta sea coherente.

例: Yes, I once forgot to submit an important assignment for school, which affected my grade. Because of this, I felt very embarrassed and learned to be more organized.

提案: Tu respuesta es confusa y contiene errores. Para mejorar, organiza tus ideas claramente y usa vocabulario adecuado. Explica tus obligaciones diarias con ejemplos específicos y usa conectores para mejorar la coherencia.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember several tasks such as washing the dishes, cleaning the bathroom, and practicing vocabulary. Most importantly, I try to start my day positively with good energy.

提案: Tu respuesta es muy breve y poco clara. Para mejorar, explica tu método para recordar cosas importantes con más detalles y usa conectores para que la respuesta sea lógica y completa.

例: When I hear important information, I try to focus on key details and repeat them in my mind. Additionally, I sometimes write notes to help me remember better.

× No, most of the times I forget what I was doing in the last five minutes.

✓ No, most of the time I forget what I was doing in the last five minutes.

The phrase 'most of the times' is incorrect because 'time' in this context is an uncountable noun and should be singular. The correct phrase is 'most of the time'.

× Yeah, and I pay the consequences because it was connected in my education and I was really, really important thing that I embarrassed to ever forget.

✓ Yeah, and I paid the consequences because it was connected to my education and it was a really, really important thing that I was embarrassed to ever forget.

The verb 'pay' should be in past tense 'paid' to match the past context. The preposition 'in' is incorrect; it should be 'connected to'. Also, 'I was really, really important thing' is missing a subject and article; it should be 'it was a really, really important thing'. The phrase 'I embarrassed to ever forget' is incorrect; it should be 'I was embarrassed to ever forget'. These corrections fix tense consistency, preposition use, and sentence structure.

× Yeah, and I pay the consequences because it was connected in my education and I was really, really important thing that I embarrassed to ever forget.

✓ Yeah, and I paid the consequences because it was connected to my education and it was a really, really important thing that I was embarrassed to ever forget.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect after 'connected'; the correct preposition is 'to'. This is a common error with prepositions that can change the meaning or make the sentence ungrammatical.

× Yeah, and I pay the consequences because it was connected in my education and I was really, really important thing that I embarrassed to ever forget.

✓ Yeah, and I paid the consequences because it was connected to my education and it was a really, really important thing that I was embarrassed to ever forget.

The sentence lacks proper subject and verb agreement in the second clause. 'I was really, really important thing' is incorrect; it should be 'it was a really, really important thing'. Also, 'I embarrassed to ever forget' is missing the auxiliary verb 'was'. These corrections improve sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× The obligations that I have when I wake up like washing dishes in the bathrooms, practicing my vocabulary and also the most important thing, wake up in a good way with a good vibrant general.

✓ The obligations that I have when I wake up, like washing dishes in the bathroom, practicing my vocabulary, and also the most important thing, waking up in a good way with a good vibrant general feeling.

The preposition 'in the bathrooms' is incorrect; it should be 'in the bathroom' as 'bathroom' is usually singular in this context. Also, 'wake up in a good way' should be 'waking up in a good way' to maintain parallel structure with the other gerunds. The phrase 'good vibrant general' is incomplete; adding 'feeling' clarifies the meaning.

× The obligations that I have when I wake up like washing dishes in the bathrooms, practicing my vocabulary and also the most important thing, wake up in a good way with a good vibrant general.

✓ The obligations that I have when I wake up, like washing dishes in the bathroom, practicing my vocabulary, and also the most important thing, waking up in a good way with a good vibrant general feeling.

To maintain parallelism in the list, all items should be in the same grammatical form. 'Washing dishes' and 'practicing my vocabulary' are gerunds, so 'wake up' should be changed to 'waking up'.

× When I heard them, I tried to catch something specific about each one.

✓ When I hear them, I try to catch something specific about each one.

The verb tense should be present to match the habitual action implied by the question. Also, 'catch something specific about each one' is acceptable, but the tense correction is more relevant here.

× When I heard them, I tried to catch something specific about each one.

✓ When I hear them, I try to catch something specific about each one.

The question asks about a habitual action, so the present tense 'hear' and 'try' are appropriate instead of past tense 'heard' and 'tried'.