Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で繰り返しが多く、文法的にも改善が必要です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、具体的な例を使って答えると良いでしょう。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I find it difficult to remember English vocabulary words.

提案: 内容が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、具体的な忘れた出来事を簡潔に説明しましょう。

例: Yes, I once forgot to bring important documents to a baseball team meeting when I was the manager in high school.

提案: 答えが不明瞭で、話の流れが不自然です。質問に直接答え、日常生活で覚える必要がある具体的な内容を明確に述べましょう。

例: As a high school student, I need to remember important facts and dates from my Japanese history classes every day.

提案: 答えは基本的に理解できますが、繰り返しや曖昧な表現が多いです。より自然で流暢な表現を使い、具体的な方法を詳しく説明しましょう。

例: I often forget things, so I write memos and review them every day to help me remember important tasks.

× I can't memorize English word.

✓ I can't memorize English words.

The noun 'word' should be plural 'words' because it refers to multiple English words, not just one.

× Yes, I have uh, before I, uh, I'm in, I, I love high school student.

✓ Yes, I have. Before, I was a high school student.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure requires a subject and verb agreement and clear tense usage. 'I'm in' and 'I love high school student' are incorrect and confusing.

× I was in uh baseball team, the manager then I can't, uh, forget.

✓ I was in a baseball team as the manager, so I can't forget.

The phrase 'baseball team' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and meaning.

× I am a high school student, so I study every day. Then I, my main, uh, study is uh, Japanese history.

✓ I am a high school student, so I study every day. My main subject is Japanese history.

The phrase 'my main study is' is awkward; 'main subject' is more appropriate. Also, 'Then' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× So Japanese history is uh, uh, calm, umm, remember?

✓ So Japanese history is easy to remember.

The original sentence is unclear and uses 'calm' incorrectly. The intended meaning is likely that Japanese history is easy to remember.

× I often forget, uh, so I write memo, uh, and uh, I, uh, I see the memo everyday, yes.

✓ I often forget, so I write memos, and I look at the memos every day.

'Write memo' should be 'write memos' (plural). 'See the memo' is better expressed as 'look at the memos'. Also, 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase).