Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích hoặc đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể. Hãy tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details quickly. For example, I sometimes forget names of people I just met.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó cung cấp ví dụ rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot to submit my homework on time because I was distracted by other tasks.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và không liên quan trực tiếp đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về những điều bạn cần nhớ hàng ngày và giải thích lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my school homework and appointments to stay organized and have a happy life.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và chi tiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích phương pháp bạn sử dụng để ghi nhớ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: I try to remember important things by repeating them in my mind and making notes in my notebook to help me recall later.

× No, I don't because my brain is not good.

✓ No, I'm not because my brain is not good.

The pronoun 'I don't' is incorrectly used here; the student likely means 'I'm not' good at memorising things. 'I don't' requires a verb to follow, such as 'I don't remember well.' The correction uses the correct pronoun and verb form to express ability.

× I don't miss memory.

✓ I don't have a good memory.

The phrase 'I don't miss memory' is incorrect; 'miss memory' is not a proper expression. The student likely wants to say they do not have a good memory. The correction uses the correct noun phrase 'have a good memory' to express this idea.

× For example when I study for a minute and forget it and when my mom.

✓ For example, when I study for a minute and then forget it, or when my mom reminds me.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. It ends abruptly with 'and when my mom.' The correction completes the sentence by adding a proper clause and conjunction to make the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× I must need collision in my school homework and.

✓ I must complete my school homework carefully.

The phrase 'need collision' is incorrect and unclear. Possibly, the student meant 'need to focus' or 'need to complete' homework. The correction replaces the unclear phrase with a proper verb and adverb to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Memory. Happy life.

✓ Having a good memory leads to a happy life.

The original is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. The correction combines the ideas into a complete sentence that clearly expresses the relationship between memory and happiness.

× I try to remember important things by. Not in my notebooks, in my brain.

✓ I try to remember important things not by writing in my notebooks, but by keeping them in my brain.

The original sentence is fragmented and misuses the preposition 'by.' The correction clarifies the method of remembering by properly using prepositions and conjunctions to form a coherent sentence.