Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如"I usually good"应为"I am usually good"。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用。此外，回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I am usually good at memorising things. For example, I can remember important points from my high school lessons for several days, which I find quite useful.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如"I do have the moment some"不自然，且"that days"应为"that day"。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并减少语气词的使用。

例: Yes, I once forgot to register for an exam during my college years, so I missed it that day, which was quite unfortunate.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不当，如"take a load of what I have eaten"和"thumb through the diet"不符合英语习惯。建议用更准确的词汇表达日常记忆内容。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember what I eat because I want to keep track of my diet for better health.

提案: 回答较为完整，但表达稍显冗长，"take a note down"应为"take notes"或"write notes"。建议简化句子并使用更自然的表达。

例: I usually write important things in a physical diary or use apps like OneNote on my phone, which is very convenient.

× Yes, I usually good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I am usually good at memorizing things.

句子缺少系动词“am”，导致时态和句子结构错误。正确表达习惯性动作时，需使用一般现在时的系动词。

× Sometimes I will keep everything in mind for several days, even a week.

✓ Sometimes I keep everything in mind for several days, even a week.

此处描述习惯性动作，使用一般现在时更合适，避免使用将来时“will”。

× And I still remember some points I recited back in my high school, which I'm very proud of.

✓ And I still remember some points I memorized back in my high school, which I'm very proud of.

“recited”通常指朗诵，语境中应使用“memorized”表示记忆内容。

× Well, I do have the moment some, uh, back in my college life and I just forgot to register an exam.

✓ Well, I did have some moments, uh, back in my college life when I just forgot to register for an exam.

原句结构混乱，缺少必要的介词和连接词，导致表达不清晰。

× So I missed the exam that days.

✓ So I missed the exam that day.

“that days”中“days”应为单数“day”，且时态应与上下文一致。

× I need to remember to take a load of what I have eaten because I think, umm, I need to thumb through the diet I take every day in the future.

✓ I need to remember what I have eaten because I think, umm, I need to review the diet I take every day in the future.

“take a load of”用法错误，应直接表达“记住我吃过的东西”；“thumb through”通常指快速翻阅，语境中用“review”更合适。

× Well, I usually take a note down in a tangible diary or just some diary applications like Floral, Obsidian, OneNote, such like that since we all have mobile phones so it's quite handy.

✓ Well, I usually take notes in a tangible diary or just use some diary applications like Floral, Obsidian, OneNote, things like that since we all have mobile phones so it's quite handy.

“take a note down in”搭配不当，应为“take notes in”或“write notes in”；“such like that”表达不自然，改为“things like that”。