Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat natural but has some grammatical errors and filler words like 'uh' which reduce fluency. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct verb forms and pluralization are important. For example, say 'I sometimes forget things such as birthdays and other activities' instead of 'I do forgot such things'.

例: I think it depends on how important the information is. Sometimes, I forget things like birthdays and other activities, so I put them in my To Do List and check it regularly. However, I am usually good at memorizing people's names.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Avoid informal phrases like 'you know' and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, correct prepositions and verb forms are needed, for example, 'I apologized to her' instead of 'I apologized her'.

例: Yes, recently I forgot my sister's birthday in July, which made me feel very bad. I apologized to her, and she said it was okay because it happens to everyone sometimes. It was an important event that I unfortunately forgot.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. For example, you can say 'In my daily life, I need to remember my routine and manage my tasks efficiently to improve my memory and organization skills.'

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my routine and manage my tasks efficiently. This helps me improve both my memory and organizational skills.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words and some repetition. Try to avoid repeating words like 'remember' and filler sounds like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I keep track of important things by using a To Do List and setting reminders on my phone for events like meetings or birthdays. Besides that, I have a good memory for important details.'

例: I keep track of important things by using a To Do List and setting reminders on my phone for events like meetings or birthdays. Besides that, I have a good memory for important details.

× sometimes I do forgot such things such as birthdays and my other, uh, activities.

✓ sometimes I do forget such things such as birthdays and my other, uh, activities.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense form, but here the auxiliary 'do' requires the base form 'forget'. So, 'do forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'do forget'. This is a common error when using emphatic 'do' in present tense.

× I think I'm good at memorizing people name and.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing people's names.

The phrase 'people name' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and should be followed by the plural noun 'names' with a possessive apostrophe to indicate 'names of people'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity.

× So I apologized her and she didn't say anything.

✓ So I apologized to her and she didn't say anything.

The verb 'apologize' requires the preposition 'to' before the person being apologized to. Omitting 'to' is a common preposition error.

× She was like OK, it's fine, it happens with people.

✓ She was like OK, it's fine, it happens to people.

The correct preposition with 'happens' in this context is 'to', not 'with'. 'Happens to people' means it occurs to them.

× how can I be better at managing things of my daily routine.

✓ how I can be better at managing things in my daily routine.

In indirect questions or statements, the word order should be subject + verb ('how I can be'), not the question form 'how can I be'. Also, 'things of my daily routine' is better expressed as 'things in my daily routine'.