Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, clarify your points with proper grammar and complete sentences. For example, directly state your ability and briefly explain the reason without hesitation sounds.

例: Honestly, I am not very good at memorizing things because I have taken some medications for my mental health, which I believe affect my memory.

提案: Avoid using filler words and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words. This will make your response more natural and effective.

例: I don't think I have forgotten anything important because I always use reminders on my phone and write important tasks on notes that I place on my walls to help me remember.

提案: Try to avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail to enrich your answer.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medications on time. To help with this, I use reminders on my phone, which ensure I never miss a dose.

提案: Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Use a clear topic sentence and add specific examples with linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: I remember important things by using the reminder app on my phone, which is very helpful. For example, it alerts me to take my medication and reminds me of upcoming events.

× I don't think that I'm a good at remembering things.

✓ I don't think that I'm good at remembering things.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'good'. In English, 'good' as an adjective does not require an article before it when used in this context. Removing 'a' corrects the sentence.

× I assumed that they were, umm, affecting me for my.

✓ I assumed that they were, umm, affecting me.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used at the end of the sentence without an object, making the sentence incomplete and unclear. Removing 'for my' corrects the sentence and makes it grammatically complete.

× I always, uh, use reminders on my phone or uh, write the important things that I have to do and umm, place it on my walls so I can, uh, remember them and avoid forgetting them.

✓ I always, uh, use reminders on my phone or uh, write the important things that I have to do and umm, place them on my walls so I can, uh, remember them and avoid forgetting them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'the important things', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'them' to agree in number with the plural noun.

× I use reminders on my phone so I can, uh, remember them and take them on time.

✓ I use reminders on my phone so I can, uh, remember them and take them at the right time.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'time' in this context. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to specific times or moments.

× It really helps me, uh, to remembering the things that I have to do, like taking my medication or like events that I have to do.

✓ It really helps me, uh, to remember the things that I have to do, like taking my medication or events that I have to do.

After the verb 'helps', the infinitive form 'to remember' should be used, not the gerund 'remembering'. Using 'to remember' is grammatically correct here.