Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意时态和主谓一致。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget a lot of details.

提案: 回答中语法错误明显，表达不够清晰，建议使用完整句子并说明具体情况。

例: Yes, I once forgot to bring an important document to school, which caused me to miss a deadline.

提案: 回答重复且缺乏细节，建议提供具体的家务内容并使用连接词丰富表达。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to do housework such as cleaning, cooking, and laundry.

提案: 回答较为简单，建议使用更自然的表达并补充更多细节说明方法的效果。

例: I usually create a list and write down important tasks, which helps me stay organized and not forget anything.

× No, exactly, I always forgot a lot of things.

✓ No, actually, I always forget a lot of things.

这里的时间状语是“always”，表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。"forgot"是过去时，和习惯性动作不符。建议用"forget"。

× I forgot the very important document that I have to give to school, so I miss it.

✓ I forgot the very important document that I had to give to school, so I missed it.

句子中描述的是过去发生的事情，主句和从句都应使用过去时态。"have to"应改为过去时"had to"，"miss"应改为过去时"missed"。

× I have to remember what housework I have to do in my daily life.

✓ I have to remember what housework I need to do in my daily life.

这里表达的是日常生活中需要做的家务，"have to do"重复使用显得冗余且不自然，建议用"need to do"替代第二个"have to do"，使表达更地道。

× I will create a list and write down something that I have to remember.

✓ I will create a list and write down things that I have to remember.

"something"通常指不可数或单数，和"write down"搭配时不太合适，且语境中应指多项内容，改为复数"things"更合适。