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提案: Сіздің жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлем құрылымы табиғи емес. Мысалы, 'it's hard to me to memory something' деген тіркес дұрыс емес. Сонымен қатар, сіздің жауабыңызда қосымша ақпарат бар, бірақ ол нақты және логикалық байланыспаған. Жауабыңызды қысқа әрі нақты етіп, дұрыс грамматикалық құрылымдарды қолданыңыз.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I have a poor memory. For example, I often forget what happened just a few minutes ago, which makes it difficult for me to remember details.

提案: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлемдер арасында байланыстырушы сөздер жетіспейді. Мысалы, 'I feel myself just like bad sister' деген сөйлем дұрыс емес. Жауабыңызды жақсартып, сезіміңізді нақты және грамматикалық дұрыс жеткізіңіз.

例: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot my brother's birthday, and I felt very embarrassed because I thought I was a bad sister.

提案: Жауабыңыз жақсы құрылымдалған және нақты. Бірақ сөйлемдер арасында байланыстырушы сөздерді қосу арқылы жауапты табиғи әрі логикалық етіңіз. Мысалы, 'also' сөзін дұрыс қолдану керек.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember several important things, such as the time I have to wake up and when my work finishes. Also, it is essential for me to keep track of my courses, including their start and end times.

提案: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық және сөздік қателер бар, мысалы, 'not importing things' дұрыс емес, 'not important things' болуы керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдер арасында байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданыңыз және сөйлемдерді қысқа әрі нақты етіңіз.

例: Actually, I remember important things by reading them or writing them down. However, it's very hard for me to remember unimportant things because I tend to forget them easily.

× it's hard to me to memory something

✓ it's hard for me to memorize something

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'hard'. The correct preposition is 'for' when indicating difficulty experienced by someone. Also, 'memory' is a noun; the verb form 'memorize' should be used here.

× it's hard to me to memory something

✓ it's hard for me to memorize something

The verb 'memory' is incorrectly used; the correct verb form is 'memorize'. This is a verb form error, not present participle, but the main issue is verb form.

× it's hard to me to memory something

✓ it's hard for me to memorize something

The phrase 'hard to me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'hard for me' to express difficulty experienced by the subject.

× I can't remember the thing that just happened 5 minutes ago

✓ I can't remember the thing that happened just 5 minutes ago

The word order 'just happened 5 minutes ago' is awkward; 'happened just 5 minutes ago' is more natural. The tense 'happened' is correct past tense.

× once I forgot my brother's birthday I felt so embarrassed and I feel myself just like bad sister

✓ once I forgot my brother's birthday I felt so embarrassed and I felt like a bad sister

The verb 'feel' should be in past tense 'felt' to match the past context. Also, 'feel myself just like bad sister' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'felt like a bad sister'.

× I feel myself just like bad sister

✓ I felt like a bad sister

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'felt like a bad sister' without 'myself'.

× It is also essential for me to keep track of my courses, including their starts and the end times

✓ It is also essential for me to keep track of my courses, including their start and end times

The plural 'starts' is incorrect; 'start' should be singular to match 'end times'. Also, 'start' and 'end' are nouns here, so pluralization should be consistent.

× when it comes to not importing things, it's very hard to me to remember because I just forget about it

✓ when it comes to unimportant things, it's very hard for me to remember because I just forget about them

The word 'importing' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'unimportant'. Also, 'hard to me' should be 'hard for me'. The pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' to refer to 'things'.