Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然，例如 "I find myself can easily remember" 應改為 "I find that I can easily remember"。建議使用更自然的句型並避免重複，例如 "vocabularies and the grammar usages" 可以簡化為 "vocabulary and grammar usage"。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially languages. For example, I have learned English and German, and I find that I can easily remember vocabulary and grammar rules.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和不自然的表達，如 "I do sometimes" 應為 "I do sometimes forget"，"as I listed" 應為 "as I make a list"。建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢，並注意時態一致。

例: Yes, I sometimes forget important things, but I try to avoid this by making lists or setting alarms. However, if I wake up late or don't sleep well, I might still forget some tasks.

提案: 回答中有重複詞語和語法錯誤，如 "my the process" 和 "the the class class"。建議簡化句子結構，並使用連接詞使內容更連貫。

例: Currently, I need to remember the process of my PhD applications. Also, since I do tutoring jobs, I prepare a list of class requirements each time.

提案: 回答中有不自然的表達，如 "please help me so a lot"，且句子結構不清晰。建議使用更簡潔且正確的句型，並用連接詞連接句子。

例: I usually remember important things by making notes and setting alarms on my smartphone. I also review these lists regularly to keep track of my tasks.

× I've learned 2 languages so far, English and German, and I find myself can easily remember the vocabularies and the grammar usages.

✓ I've learned 2 languages so far, English and German, and I find that I can easily remember vocabulary and grammar usage.

The phrase 'I find myself can easily remember' is incorrect because 'find myself' should be followed by a verb ending in -ing or a reflexive action. Here, 'I find that I can' is the correct structure. Also, 'vocabularies' and 'grammar usages' are uncountable nouns and should be singular: 'vocabulary' and 'grammar usage'.

× Yes, I do sometimes and I try not to forget important things as I listed or I set alarms for those important issues.

✓ Yes, I do sometimes and I try not to forget important things as I list or I set alarms for those important issues.

The verb 'listed' is in past tense, but the sentence context is present habitual action, so 'list' (present tense) should be used to match the ongoing habit.

× But sometimes when I maybe get up too late or I didn't sleep well, I might make some mistakes I forgot it.

✓ But sometimes when I maybe get up too late or I don't sleep well, I might make some mistakes or forget things.

The phrase 'I didn't sleep well' is past tense, but the sentence describes a general condition, so present tense 'I don't sleep well' is appropriate. Also, 'I might make some mistakes I forgot it' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I might make some mistakes or forget things' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Now because I'm preparing for PhD application so I need to know my the process of my applications and also I'm doing tutoring jobs so I need to make the the class class requirement list every time I prepare it.

✓ Now, because I'm preparing for my PhD application, I need to know the process of my application, and also, since I'm doing tutoring jobs, I need to make the class requirement list every time I prepare it.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect pronouns and articles: 'my the process' should be 'the process', 'my applications' should be 'my application' (singular), and 'the the class class requirement list' has repeated words. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× I usually remember important things by listing notes on my phones or like setting alarms on my smartphones. And please help me so a lot because I regularly review these lists or alarms so I can know what I need to do.

✓ I usually remember important things by listing notes on my phone or by setting alarms on my smartphone. And please help me a lot because I regularly review these lists or alarms so I can know what I need to do.

'Phones' and 'smartphones' should be singular to match the context of personal device usage. Also, 'please help me so a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'please help me a lot'. These corrections improve pronoun and quantifier usage.